1. 能提供一些高考英語寫作的好的句子嗎
1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在這個迅速發展的世界裡，對每個人來說，學好英語是非常重要的。
同樣句型包括：It is important/（necessary, difficult, convenient, possible）for sb. to do sth.
2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力，你取得的進步就越大。
(1)The+比較級..., the+比較級...
(2)比較級+and+比較級（The world is getting smaller and smaller.）
3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每個人都為保護環境做出貢獻，世界會變得更加美好。
類似的句型還有：If necessary…, they can…
4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them everyday.
記憶新單詞最好的方法是每天操練這些單詞。
5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic.
我的家庭氣氛溫馨和睦。
6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人們為什麼選擇生活在城市的原因是因為城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
7. I had a great first impression of American people.
我對美國人民有了很好的第一印象。
8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我們對自己解決問題的能力有足夠的信心。
9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
隨著現代科技的迅速發展，互聯網已經成為生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.
大家應該盡可能的多讀書。
11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and 「opening up」 policy.
由於實施了改革開放政策，中國變得更加繁榮了。
12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.
我們都需要呼吸清新的空氣，我們都需要飲用潔凈的水，我們都需要綠地來享受。
13. Let's work together to make our world a better place.
讓我們一起努力把世界變得更加美好。
14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and proctive things.
我們應該充分利用好時間去做有用的、富有成效的事。
15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.
我們應該養成一個好習慣，明智地利用時間。
16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month.
我的確想知道的是，他是否會在下個月出國。
17. Television is harmful to developing minds.
電視不利於開發心智。
18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized
孩子們都有很大的潛能，而父母卻沒有意識到這一點。
19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.
在過去的10年裡，我們學校發生了巨大的變化。
20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.
那些花更多時間和家人在一起的人通常會更健康更幸福。
21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
這份工作太辛苦，差點使我半途而廢。
(1)直接使用：so… that…
The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
這份工作太辛苦、太無聊，而且沒完沒了，這使我非常累，差點半途而廢。
(2)能夠增加句子層次的高級連詞還有：
(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)
22. The Red Star Television Factory, which proces TV sets of quality, was set up in th
e 1980's.
生產高品質電視的紅星電視機廠，始建於1980年。
23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.
我們可以向世界每個地方發電子郵件的電子閱覽室，對老師和同學都同樣開放。
24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.
我感覺我會是你們公司所需要的人。
25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高級詞彙：increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graates.
工人和工程師的數量已超過了2000人，而且他們有80%都是大學學歷。
26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.
在校園內，學生擁有手機的趨勢在不斷增長。
27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.
現今，在農村地區還有很多孩子失學。我認為原因之一就是他們的家庭太貧困，而無法供應他們上學。
28. People should pay more attention to the ecation of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.
人們應該增加對兒童教育的重視，因為他們會在祖國的未來扮演重要的角色。
29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.
到2008年，我們會看到北京像花園一樣，有著更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。
30. How nice to hear from you again.
能再次收到你的來信真是太好了。
31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
敬盼早日回復。
I'm looking forward to meeting you in no time.
我期待與你早日相見。
32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.
如果你有什麼問題和請求只管跟我說。
33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
不管你將來做什麼，英語都是最重要的。
34. Nothing is more important than to receive ecation.
沒有什麼比接受教育更重要的事了。
35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
毫無疑問，玩電子游戲正在成為影響學生學習的最大問題。
36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.
顯然，早該採取一些積極的措施來解決問題。
寫作高手使用的高難度表達：
I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.
我建議有關部門採取一些有效措施改善現狀。
37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自從他上高中，他一直很用功。
38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我們應該不遺餘力的美化我們的環境。
39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
吸煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。
40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.
有句名言說道：風暴使樹木深深紮根。
41. It is a great honor for me to introce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
很榮幸給你介紹我的一位好朋友，劉翔。
42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.
出於英語教師世家的她，對英語有著特別的興趣。
描寫人物性格的高級得分詞彙如下：
diligent 勤奮的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的
modest謙虛的 optimistic樂觀的 talkative健談的enthusiastic熱情的
43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.
我充分認識到英語對我的未來是多麼的重要。
44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!
我覺得電子字典很方便，但會使人們變懶。
45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.
總之，出國留學的優點要大於它的缺點。
46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.
現在，我想這真是一次成功的經歷，並且我完全理解了勞動的意義。
47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.
通過這次的地震，我認識到了群眾的力量是無窮的。
高級名言諺語活學活用。
解釋：「群眾的力量是無窮的」這句名言是我們自己造的，極具威力，然後再安在毛主席的頭上，更顯力量。最後為了增加真實性加上時間和地點，使判卷老師誤以為真，根本不敢懷疑。於是，心想：「這個句子太棒了，我都沒聽說過！」
造句：In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.
48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I'd be more than happy to be your guide.
如果你有空閑時間我的家鄉做客，我會非常樂意做你的導游。
49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about students' using the Internet.
如今，老師和家長都對學生上網現象極為擔心。
50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.
對於該問題的看法因人而異。
51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.
我們被賦予新的機會和面臨著新的挑戰。
52. Thank you for your consideration.
感謝你的體諒。
53. I really appreciate what you've done for my family and me.
我衷心感謝你為我和我家人所做的一切。
We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.
如果你幫助我們小孩學英語，我們將感激不盡。
54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.
我們永遠都不會忘記在一起度過的日子。
55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.
很多人開始意識到鍛煉的重要性了。
56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.
報告將在10月12日3：30在報告廳舉行。
57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.
學生應該知道如何利用他們的時間。
58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.
我厭倦了日復一日地做一些例行公事。
59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.
征服英語不亞於征服一座高山，都需要決心，勇氣和毅力。
60. I'm disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.
我對我們隊在運動會上的表現感到失望。
61. I'm very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.
到目前為止，我對我們取得的成績很是滿意。
更多表示「決心」的高級句型：
I'm determined to…
I have made up my mind to complete the task.
62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.
這個城市位於長江畔。
63. I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
兩星期前收到了你的來信，我真是太高興了。
64. I'm writing to request more information about the day tour to London.
我寫信是為了了解更多去倫敦旅行的信息。
65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
最近，我們班展了開一場討論，是關於中學生是否有必要帶手機去上學。
66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.
我不知道你是否方便多告訴我一些有關旅行的事。
67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.
可以肯定，如果開車的人少一些，空氣污染就一定會減少。
68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.
我個人認為教師是世界上最重要的職業。
69. We can't imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.
我們無法想像沒有純凈的水，這個世界會變成生么樣子。
70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
當我沿著公園路往東走的時候，有一個老人在街的另一邊從公園里走出來。
71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
在大城市，有更多的學校和醫院供人們使用。
72. Some people think that we should read extensively.
有一些人認為，我們應該有選擇性地閱讀。
73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.
在我看來，你結束留學後應該回國。
74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.
另一個原因，我認為你回國可以更方便地照顧你日漸年邁的父母。
75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.
我們學校通常下午四點下課。
76. I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend tomorrow's lecture on American history.
我很抱歉，明天我不能參加那場關於美國歷史的演講。
77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
花在教育鍛煉上的時間是25分鍾，只有12分鍾的時間用來做家務。
78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.
你可能忘了昨天下午你花錢買了其他東西。
79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.
好習慣是成功的捷徑。
80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
那個年輕的小男孩深深地感動著我，因為我相信雷鋒一直活在我們的心中。
81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.
很多新的樓房建了起來，路也都拓寬了。
82. It is more than ten months since we last met.
從我們上次見面到現在已經有十個多月了。
83. It's very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.
每天幫助我復習功課，你真是太好了。
84. Nothing can live without air and water.
沒有空氣和水，任何東西都不能生存。
85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.
我寧願住在農村，而不願住在城市。
86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.
應阻止人們往河裡扔臟東西。
英語學習的供重豪：Emily0英語（不要0）
2. 誰有高考英語作文六大類型的範文！（帶翻譯）
高考英語滿分作文-租房
假設你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將於九月到你所在城市的建新華文學校學中文，來信請你在學校附近為他找一套住房。請根據圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，並告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．詞數：100左右：
2．參考詞彙：房租—Tent(n.).
I』m very happy to receive your letter, and I』m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I』ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
滿分理由
本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句並用，還使用了以『which，』引導的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富於變化，不愧為考場佳作。
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譯:
我很高興收到你的信，我很高興地聽到你會去中國且在我們這里學習中文的消息。我已經找到了寓所。在芳草街，不遠處就是我們的中文學校。乘坐11號巴士就可以到達，前一站就是中文學校。寓所是在三樓,有3個房間，其中一個是卧室，其他兩個衛生間和廚房。有一張床，一個沙發和一個辦公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也許這房子不如你的願望，但我會盡我所能，滿足您的需求。如果還不夠，給我寫信，我會尋找另外一個更好的地方。
希望你能很快來到這里！
就到這里啦！
此致，
李華
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 說起來容易做起來難。
4.Where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫釐，謬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 穩扎穩打無往而不勝。
7.A fall into the pit，a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 實踐出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a ll boy. 只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.無德之美猶如沒有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
11.More hasty，less speed. 欲速則不達。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，學到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 閃光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始於足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而後行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 偉業非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所見略同。
18.well begun，half done. 好的開始等於成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 眾口難調。
20.Out of sight，out of mind. 眼不見，心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事實勝於雄辯。
22.Call back white and white back. 顛倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有輕重緩急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 壞事傳千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真情。
26.live not to eat，but eat to live. 活著不是為了吃飯，吃飯為了活著。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行動勝過語言。
28.East or west，home is the best. 金窩銀窩不如自家草窩。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能當飯吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth，a needy age. 少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。
35.As the tree，so the fruit. 種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn，to learnistobetterlive.活著為了學習，學習為了更好的活著
3. 2012北京高考英語情景作文平均分是多少開放式作文平均分是多少
文科情景作文平均8.9， 開放寫作 4.7；理科情景作文平均10.2.開放寫作5.6.
4. 高考英語寫作技巧
1.盡量來用短句，避免長句。自
2.多用高級詞彙，避免誤用。
3.字跡清晰，尤其注意要工整，不能塗改，有時間最好打草稿。
4.多留意範文的開頭與結尾。注意借鑒
5.注意總結，對各種類型的文章最好能背上一二篇範文。
（這是我的親身經驗！）
（我今年高考英語作文應該只扣了2分。也祝你取得成功）
5. 高考英語寫作技巧是什麼
1
改變句子開頭方式
在通常情況下，英語句子的排列方式為「主語+謂語+賓語」，即主語位於句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式，比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等，會使文章增強表現力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有這樣我們才能保護好環境。
· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。
2
用詞要豐富
為了使表達更生動，更富表現力，同學們在寫作時應盡量避免重復使用同一詞語來表示同一意思，尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到「喜歡」二字，就會立刻想起like，事實上，英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多，如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜歡看書，而我的兄弟卻喜歡看電視。
·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你幫助我。
3
合理使用省略句
恰當地使用省略句，不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔，而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。
· He may be busy. If he』s busy, I』ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I』ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙，要是這樣，我以後再來拜訪。要是不忙，我現在可以見他嗎?
· She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t.
她本可申請這份工作的，但她沒有。
4
運用非謂語結構
非謂語結構通常被認為是一種高級結構，適當運用非謂語結構，會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。
· As I didn』t know her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
由於不知道她的地址，我沒法和她聯系。
·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有媽媽的陪伴，寶寶很快
5
結合使用長、短句
在英語寫作中，過多地使用長句或過多地使用短句都不好。正確的做法是，根據實際情況在文章中交替使用長句與短語，使文章顯得錯落有致，這樣不僅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章讀起來鏗鏘有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒後，我們唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，還有的講笑話、下棋，大家玩得很開心。
6
使用短語代替單詞
一味使用單詞也會讓閱卷老師產生審美疲勞，適當地用一些常見的的片語和短語，也能讓文章閃亮起來。
· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已決定長大了當老師。
· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜歡音樂。
· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聰明，他總是能想出新的點子。
· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
學生們認為應該省出一些零花錢來買書。
7
套用某些固定表達
好的固定表達能讓你的文章顯得不那麼生硬。
· He was very tired. He couldn』t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了，不能再往前走了。
· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
這電影很有趣，學生和老師都很喜歡。
· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的兒子已經長大，可以自己照顧自己了。
8
使用地道英語。我們只能寫地道的英語。
· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
別擔心，大膽試一試，你很快就會學會的。
· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
謝謝你陪我玩。
9
合理使用「高級」結構
使用一兩句定語從句，名詞性從句或狀語從句等高級的句型，能給文章增色不少。
· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
這就是我們上周參觀的工廠。
· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我們努力工作，我們就會進步的。
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引用名言警句點綴
在寫作時根據實際情況恰當地用上一兩句名言警句來點綴文章，不僅使文章顯得有深度、有智慧，而且會讓文章在評分中上一個「得分檔次」。
· As the proverb says, 「Where there is a will, there is a way.」 Though you fail this time, you needn』t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗語所說：「有志者，事竟成。」 雖然這次你失敗了，但你沒必要灰心。只要你努力工作。堅持夢想，總有一天你會成功的。
· There is a proverb going like this, 「Life isn』t a bed of roses.」 It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗語是這樣說的：「生活不是玫瑰花床。」每個人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到問題和困難，這是真的。
· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, 「A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.」
在當代世界，越來越多的人獨自生活，這對我們的生命是不太好的。我們最好多交朋友，享受友誼。正如俗話所說：「遠親不如近鄰。」
怎麼樣，你學會了嗎？祝你英語寫作得高分！
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6. 如何讓高考英語寫作達到一類文標准
一類文的關鍵：
1用簡單句寫復雜思想--凝練
學了這么多年英語，為什麼還不能寫出好的句子？原因在於想得太復雜了。我們可以將要表達的漢語思想，全部說成簡單的句子，而簡單句，在寫作時是考生可以掌控的。之後再將簡單句加以潤色、組合，使之登堂入室，奪取高分。
例如寫這句話：大學生剛剛畢業就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。看到這樣的漢語句子，一般我們的反應是要用It is impossible for sb. to do sth.. 這樣的句型，然後想著往裡填詞：在sb. 的位置填上剛剛畢業的大學生，在不定式的位置填上找到高薪的工作，如下所示：
It is impossible for剛剛畢業的大學生to找到高薪的工作。
那麼剛剛畢業的大學生怎麼寫？英語裡面好像找不到一個表示剛剛畢業的形容詞放在大學生前面，所以就要用定語從句，寫成college students who have just graated，然後怎麼寫高薪的，英語裡面也沒有這樣一個形容詞放在jobs的前面，所以用定語從句，寫成to find jobs which can give them a lot of money。這樣這個句子將寫成：It is impossible for college students who have just graated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. 這樣就能將兩個定語從句放在這個句型裡面，然而會很容易容易犯錯。實際上，剛剛畢業的大學生可以寫成：newly-graated students, 而高薪的工作可以寫成well-paying jobs, 將這兩個短語放進去，成為：It is impossible for newly-graated students to find well-paying jobs，與上面的定語從句相比會獲得更高的分數。原因是語言更加凝練，富有感染力。
2 復合句的合理使用--潤色
我們能不能換一種思路，想得簡單點，把上面一句話拆分成為四句：
①每年，都有很多大學生畢業。
②他們都想找到工作。
③這些工作可以給他們很多錢。
④這是不可能的。
我相信這樣的句子大部分考生很快就可以寫出來：
①Every year, many college students graate。
②They all want to find jobs。
③These jobs can give them a lot of money。
④This is impossible。
第一句話屬於五種簡單句中的主謂句，第二句是主謂賓，第三句是主謂間賓直賓，第四句是主系表。
下面我們看看能不能潤色一下：第一句話我們將熟悉的many改為heaps and heaps of (一批一批的)，這是換詞；然後？：from universities；又想到還有獨立的學院，再加上and institutes。第一句話變成：Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graate from universities and institutes。
這句話這樣一改，便成氣候了。
第二句和第三句可以用定語從句連接起來，因為第三句的主語是第二句最後jobs的重復，所以②＋③成為：They all want to find jobs，which can give them a lot of money. 再潤色，我們發現give可以改為offer，a lot of money可以改為handsome salaries。利用學過的語法知識我們可以讓這個句子更加復雜，給定語從句中加一個插入語：they hope，放在which後面，這樣這句話就成為：They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries。
第四句話也可以和前兩句連在一起，這次不採用主從復合句，而採用並列句，因為意思發生轉折，故用but連接，而impossible太絕對了，改為hardly possible，於是成為：They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible。
所以最初的那句話，經過拆解、加工(換詞和連句)形成了下面的一組句子：Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs，which they hope can offer them handsome salaries，but this is hardly possible。
上文總共32個詞，與我們剛才認為很難達到的那個句子It is impossible for newly-graated students to find well-paying jobs (10個詞)相比，氣勢上毫不遜色，但是哪一種寫法更適合廣大考生的情況呢？當然是從熟悉的東西著手改造更為可取，像newly-graated和 well-paying這樣的天外來客式的片語需要積累，或者自己有意去搜尋。再強調一下：上面這組句子是我們從簡單句變過來的。這說明：簡單句這只丑小鴨也可以變成白天鵝！這是對高考考生寫作應試方面最大的啟示！