1. 大學英語作文看圖寫話,急用
A man wants to bring down the bricks from upstairs.He pulled a box upstairs with a fixed pulley, climbed a ladder and put the bricks in the box, but when he put the bricks on the ground, he accidentally lifted himself up through the pulley.The box became lighter because the bricks fell on the ground. He was wheeled to the ground. Unfortunately, he was hurt by the bricks on the ground.
2. 看圖,幫忙寫一篇高中英語作文作為參考,並詳細敘英語寫作技巧。萬分感謝!
由於美國人生活繁忙、緊張,講求快速,時間就是金錢,所以近年來許多美國大學也在推行日常生活的講和寫,不用難字,不寫長句,不含偏見的「三不」。也就是說,盡量使用簡短易懂的白話英語 (Plain English),寫得愈白愈好,用字愈少愈妙,使別人可以一目瞭然,充分了解。這不但可節省「思索」時間,也可避免對方的誤解。還有,老外為了族群和諧相處,也不使用帶有偏見的字眼。以下即為一些例子,以供讀者參考。
1. 尤其在商業上,報章雜志或公文書信上,盡量不用難字 (big word) 或過時的字眼 (old-fashioned word); 例如:
Many people feel that moral ecation is the infrastructure of higher learning. (許多人認為道德教育是高等知識的基礎) (如果用 foundation 或 basis 代替 infrastructure 就更明白)
Three hundred acres of land is the parameter of our university,s expansion (growth). (三百英畝的土地是本大學發展的限度) (如果用limit代替parameter,會更簡單易懂。)
This news has been disseminated all over the U.S. (這消息已散布到全美各地) (如果用spread取代disseminated,不更簡單?) (動詞時態是:spread, spread, spread)
The president of this college is not diminutive in size. (這大學的校長個子不小) (假如用small代替diminutive,不更明白嗎?)
I have to elucidate this document to my staff. (我要向我的員工解釋這份文件) (如用explain代替elucidate,也許更明白。)
Mr. A will endeavor to be a physician. (A 先生想嘗試當個醫生) (如果用try代替endeavor,會更淺白。) (endeavour = endeavor)
We hope to visualize world peace in the future. (我們希望將來看到世界和平)(如果用see代替visualize,也許更簡單!)
The charitable organization solicits for our annual donation. (慈善機構要求頤且荒暌歡壤志?(假如用 ask 代替 solicit,更淺白易懂。)(solicitation是名詞)
We don't know what may transpire when we have a new boss. (當新老闆來後,我們不知會有什麼發生。) (如果用happen代替transpire,也許更明白。)
Please act as soon as possible on the aforementioned matter. (前面提過的事,請盡速辦理。)(如果用 previous 代替古字 aforementioned 不是更明白?)
這就像美國大文豪馬克吐溫 Mark Twain 也曾說過:「我不願在字典里找長字或難字,我絕不用『metropolis』這個字,因為我同樣可以用『city』這個字來代替」。羅斯福總統為了強調美國政府不會遺忘那些窮人,在一篇講詞里用了這么一句:「We are endeavoring to construct a more inclusive society.」後來被人批評咬文嚼字,賣弄文筆。如果用淺白易懂的字眼寫成:「We are going to make this country in which no one is left out.」或「We are trying to make everyone equal.」也許更簡單明白!
2. 老外也主張不寫嚕蘇或絢麗的字眼(flowery or wordy),句子應該越短越好,一句能用兩個字,絕不多加一個。 例如:
At this point in time, we should pull together for our goal. (現在我們應該為我們的目標團結一致)(如果說:Now, we should pull……更簡單。因為 at this point in time = now)
Despite the fact that my English is not very good, I am not discouraged. (雖然我的英語不好,但我不灰心。) (如果說:Although my English is not…… 就更簡短。因為despite the fact tha t= although = Though)
I am of the opinion that Mr. Lee should resign from this position. (我想李先生應該辭職) (假如說:I think Mr. Lee should……不是更簡單嗎?因為I am of the opinion = I think)
He quitted the job e to the fact that he was sick. (他由於生病而辭職) (若說:He quitted the job because he was sick. 更簡單。因為 e to the fact that = because)
In the majority of cases,he likes to ride bike to the office.(他通常喜歡騎單車到辦公室) (如果說:Usually, he likes to ride…… 更簡單。因為 in the majority of cases = usually)
She shows a preference for tea rather than coffee. (她喜歡茶而不是咖啡) (若說:She prefers tea rather……更簡短清楚,因為 show a preference for = prefer)
I will bring the matter to the attention of Mr. Wang. (我要通知王先生)
如果只說:I will tell Mr. Wang (about the matter). 不是更簡單嗎?因為 bring the matter to the attention of = tell = inform) (句子最後面:「about the matter」可以省去); 同理,也要避免意義的重復或用字的多餘 (rendant);
例如:
The consensus(of opinion)is that we have to act right away.(大家認為我們必須立即行動)(of opinion 可以省去,因為 consensus 的意思,就是大家的意見。)
The letter shows that the problem(continues to)remain unsolved.(他的信顯示問題尚未解決)(continue to 是多餘的字,因為 remain 已經有 continue 的含意。所以句子就成為:The letter shows that the problem remains unsolved.)
He has made his (final) conclusion in his speech.(他在演說里做出結論) (final 是多餘的字,因為 conclusion 已經含有 final 的意思。)
He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。(他有多年經商的經驗) (actual 也是多餘的字,因為 experience 已有 actual 的意味)
We assembled (together) all the parts for our radio.(我們裝好收音機的零件)(因為 assemble 本身就有 together 的意思,所以 together 是多餘的)
Enclosed (herewith ) please find the report of the meeting.(herewith 是多餘的字,因為 enclosed 就有 herewith 的意思)(即:附上會議報告,請查收)
寫到這里,想起一位深受美國人民愛戴,一向主張不寫長句、不嚕蘇的美國已故參議員 Stephen Young,他每次受邀參加會議、演講、宴會時,他的回信只有三個字「我會到」(I'll be there)……。也有人打趣的說:「講演或寫作的句子,就像穿迷你裙,愈短愈好。」(Like wearing mini-skirt, sentences in speech or writing should be the shorter, the better.)
此外還有:in reference to = about;draw to close = end; at an early date = soon等。
3. 老外為了族群和諧相處,除不用歧視或偏見的字眼外,連男女性別,也要避免區別,以示「平等」。 例如:
Mankind are considered the smartest animals in the world。(人類是世上最聰明的動物)= Man is the smartest animal……。 (如果改為:Human beings are considered the smartest animals…… 就能包括男女。所以 mankind = man = human beings) (注意:mankind 後面動詞要用多數,而 man 的後面動詞,則用單數)
Manpower seems not strong enough in developing our economy here. (發展這里的經濟,似乎缺乏人力資源。)(如果說:Labor power seems not strong enough… 也就沒有「男性主義」的感覺。可見 manpower = labor power = work force = human resources)
This small company hired a cleaning woman yesterday.(這個小公司昨天請來一名清潔女工)(如果說:This small company hired an office cleaner…也就沒有男女之分了)
He (she) has been a committee chairman (chairwoman) since 1998. (自從1998年他就是委員會主席) (假如把chairman或chairwoman改為chairperson或chair,就沒有男女之分。) (如指討論會的主持人,也可稱為 moderator 或 coordinator。)
Many businessmen (businesswomen) feel their jobs are very stressful.(許多商人覺得工作壓力很大)(如果把 businessmen (businesswomen) 改為 business people 或 business executives 或 business managers 就可包括男女了)(凡是單數 man 或 woman,其多數都是 men 或 women。)
Policemen (policewomen) should treat citizens with courtesy.(警察對人民應該有禮貌)(假如把 policemen 或 policewomen 改為 police officers 就可避免男女性別)
Congressmen (congresswomen) should speak up for their constitutes. (國會議員應該為其選民說話)(constitute = voter) (我們也可以把 congressmen 或 congresswomen 改為 members of congress 或 congressional representatives) Stewardesses for international regions may get jet lag sometimes.(國際航線的空中小姐有時會有時差疲憊的現象)(如把 stewardess 改為 flight attendant,就能包括男女空中服務員。)同理,我們可以把 salesman 或 saleswoman 改為 salesperson;把 mailman 改為 mail carrier 或 postal worker;把 foreman 改為 supervisor 等等。
當然,一些帶有種族偏見的字眼,甚至有侮辱的味道(insulting words 或 slur),也要盡量避免使用,以免鬧出麻煩。例如:
對黑人不要用 Negro,更不能用 Nigger(用 Black 還可以),禮貌的說法是 Afro-American 或 African-American;
對白人不要用 Honky(這是黑人罵白人的用字),正確用法是 Caucasian,或 white people; 對猶太人不要用 Hymies,應該叫 Jewish 或 Jewish people;
對越南人不要用 Gook,要用 Vietnamese; 至於墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人,包括 Puerto Rico,正確的用法多是 Hispanics 或 Latins,不過據說西班牙人為了維護自己的文化,倒喜歡別人稱為 Spaniard。
還有黑白結婚的孩子,也不可稱為 Oreo(Oreo 餅乾外面是巧克力,裡面是白奶油)。
有偏見的老外,不叫華人為 Chinese,而叫 Chink 或 Chinaman(從前還叫「Yellow Peril」,即黃禍)。遇到這種事,怎麼辦呢?我建議:「君子不與小人斗」,最好是「不理」(ignore)或「走開」(walk away)。不過老外與你談話時,如果使用這些不禮貌的字眼,那麼你就可以說:「For your information,the word you just used is derogatory(或 inappropriate)to describe someone of my race.」(只想讓你知道:你剛剛所用的字,來描寫我的族群,是很不合適的)。這時,你也可說一句「拜拜」了。
3. 高中英語作文,看圖寫作
你可以參考這里的同話題英語作文,相信會有助於你:專
http://wenku..com/view/59cf8219cc7931b765ce15bb.html
祝你開心如意!屬
4. 英語作文看圖寫作,求圖的大概意思
Success belongs to the person who persists!Nothing great can be done without efforts.However,most of failures never have a taste of success not becasue they are lazy or stupid but for they dpn't hold on enough long to see the true result.Thouh we all know that good beginning is half done,what we should keep in mind is that those who laugh last laugh best.Therefore,once you make up your mind to do sth,no matter how hard or long it takes you,just stick to it.You may fail or feel desperate at times
5. 大學英語作文,看圖寫作
上面的好像是象形文字,但是這個人不認識,卻說是不是日語就是韓語,反正不是英語。寓意這個,無非就是從熱愛中國文化等等扯就是啦。
6. 四級英語作文 看圖寫作 描述圖像,並且寫出自己的觀點和建議。
十面霾伏
三年級 | 寫景 | 345字
早上醒來,外面是天昏地暗,灰濛蒙的。一看錶,是六點零兩分,我有點納悶。都六點多了,外面怎麼還那麼黑。對了,昨天天氣預報說今天有霧霾。我從小到大還沒見過霧霾呢,真想見識見識!我和媽媽吃過早飯,整理好東西後,出發了。我和媽媽都小心翼翼的靠著路邊走,大約近兩米處的地方都看不清事物。這如煙籠罩的世界使車輛難行,使人舉步維艱,不辨南北。 據媽媽所說這是因為汽車尾氣排放,工業製造污染等對大自然的破壞。我似懂非懂的點了點頭,媽媽又告訴我霧霾天影響交通,容易出事故,它是一種災害天氣,對農作物的生長有害,同時也對人類的身體健康構成了威脅。 我們通過這煙霧繚繞的世界,終於到達了目的地—學校。下課後我們都認為霧霾天氣很好玩兒,可誰又知道他的壞處?動手保護大自然,盡量少出現霧騰騰的霧霾天氣,讓我們一起行動吧!
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本文小作者向我們描述了霧霾的天氣,文章的語句通順,句意流暢,敘寫較為生動,文章的語言的表達能力較好。文章的不足之處在於雖有中心主題,但表達不夠充分有力,言而不實,空而無力。
7. 看圖寫英語作文
One day, the weather was really good. Birds were singing in the trees. A boy finished his homework, so he went outside to play football. His name is Peter, and he is a great football player. Suddenly, he used too much force and kicked the ball to the tree. However, the ball was stuck on there. He did not know what to do. Just that time, an old man holding an umbrella passed by. The boy asked him for help. After the consideration, the old man threw his umbrella to the ball, and the ball fell down. But the umbrella was stuck there. The little boy saw the umbrella and did not know what to do. So he turned around and ran away. The old man shook his head desperately.
8. 英語作文 看圖寫作
你好,同學,才看到你向我們團隊發來的求助題,現在為你解答
On Bridge Street there is a hospital. There is a xxx(看不清版,權自己寫)between the xxx (看不清,自己寫)and the hospital. There are some trees on Center Street. There is a bank on the right of Long Street. And there is a hotel across from the bank.
希望能幫到你,祝更上一層樓O(∩_∩)O
有不明白的請繼續追問,可以詳談嘛(*^__^*)
9. 英語作文,看圖寫作
In today's society, even though medicine has been greatly developed, but very expensive medical bills, either surgery or drugs, there is profiteering. Many poor people have no money treatment. Also, some people just appear a little sick, but also spend a lot of money treatment. Bad influence on society. If our country can build a good system, regulate the medical profession, then I believe that our lives in better shape, we will be happier.——高一水平~~~所以會有很多專語法錯誤!屬