上海英語寫作指導

❶ 寫上海的英語作文

shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是個漂亮的城市there
are
many
tall
buildings
in
shanghai
and
the
air
in
shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高樓大廈，鳥語花香
shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是國際化版城市很多來自世界各地的權人都來上海做生意shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好

❷ 上海高考英語作文評分標准

高考英語高考作文評分標准:

1.本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。

2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。

3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的，從總分中減去2分。

4. 評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。

5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。

6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。

7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。

(2)上海英語寫作指導擴展閱讀：

高考英語的復習方法：

1.詞彙題。詞彙是組成英語知識大廈的基石，英語詞彙量的多少標志著英語水平。擴大詞彙量的好方法是：把閱讀材料中以及練習題的生詞和短語全都標出，在字典中查一遍，註上音標，註解和典型用法。

高考復習時的那份高考詞彙表，包括了高考要考的所有詞彙。在最後階段，可以將詞彙表從頭到尾背3-4遍。首先把詞彙表過一遍，熟悉和簡單的一帶而過。重點放在不熟悉的和重要的詞彙上。把不熟悉的單詞一定用特殊顏色的筆記號下來，然後下次專門反復閱讀。

而重要的詞彙就是在考試中經常見到，而又一知半解的詞彙。這些詞彙一定要用字典認真查出，加以記憶。

2.語法題。在復習語法的時候，注意查漏補缺， 掃除盲點。認真對待所有的語法題目。在對答案和講評時，則一定要把錯的更正，把知識點記憶一遍。查找自己知識結構中存在的缺陷，掃除知識的盲點。在語法題方面，配備一本專門的"錯題本"，有時間就經常翻看，解決記憶問題。

3.完形填空題。多做練習，做完之後全文讀一遍，建立自己的語感，有助於以後的做題。同時，建議一邊讀一邊做，能確定的就選擇了，不確定的就標記上，暫時不管。第二遍的時候再通過對上下文的理解去分析不確定的選項。這樣可以節省時間，而正確率也能有所提高。

4.閱讀理解題。閱讀量大，分值高。平時要多做閱讀，多做限定時間的閱讀。做題時先粗看全文，理出文章的大體意思，再看問題，根據問題的特點，再帶著問題在文章中找出細節的支持點來。

5.七選五題。此道題是一個新點。建議多找一些練習。注意七個選項中的有信息意義的實詞，利用上下文重復的原理來做出推理判斷。

6.作文題。首先注意的是書寫工整。給閱卷老師一個良好的印象，這是成功的第一步。在下面寫好並且記憶下來開頭的一兩個句子和結尾的句子，考試時進行改寫放上去。

參考資料來源：網路--高考英語

❸ 寫上海的英語作文

shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是個漂亮的城市there
are
many
tall
buildings
in
shanghai
and
the
air
in
shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高樓大廈，鳥語花香
shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是國際化城市很多來自世界各地的專人都來上海做屬生意shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好

❹ 介紹上海的英語作文

Shanghai is the largest city in China in terms of population with over 20 million people in its metropolitan area. Located on China's central eastern coast at the mouth of the Yangtze River, the city is administered as a municipality with province-level status
The city is an emerging tourist destination renowned for its historical landmarks such as the Bund and Xintiandi, its modern and ever-expanding Pudong skyline including the Oriental Pearl Tower, and its new reputation as a cosmopolitan center of culture and design. Today, Shanghai is an important centre of commerce and finance. One conference paper has referred to it as a future global city and the popular press have described it as the "showpiece" of the world's fastest-growing economy

❺ 英語作文：介紹上海是怎樣的城市

Shanghai
is
a
beautiful
city.
上海是個漂亮的城市There
are
many
tall
buildings
in
Shanghai
and
the
air
in
Shanghai
is
fresh
and
there
are
many
green
trees
and
flowers,
birds
are
singing
everywhere.上海有很多高樓大廈，鳥語花香
Shanghai
is
a
big
international
city,
many
people
come
from
different
places
and
countries
are
doing
business
here,
上海是國際化城回市很多來自世界各地答的人都來上海做生意Shanghai
people
are
very
nice
and
friendly.上海人很友好
望採納

❻ 英語作文：介紹上海是怎樣的城市

Shanghai is a beautiful city. 上海源是個漂亮的城市There are many tall buildings in Shanghai and the air in Shanghai is fresh and there are many green trees and flowers, birds are singing everywhere.上海有很多高樓大廈，鳥語花香 Shanghai is a big international city, many people come from different places and countries are doing business here, 上海是國際化城市很多來自世界各地的人都來上海做生意Shanghai people are very nice and friendly.上海人很友好

望採納

❼ 請問誰能幫我找到08年英語高考上海卷及江西卷寫作題的範文,謝謝!

廣東卷
第一節 基礎寫作（共小題，滿分15分）

你很榮幸地成為2008北京奧運會的一名志願者，負責編寫奧運比賽項目的英語介紹。

寫作內容

請根據以下中文提綱，編寫射擊項目的英語介紹：

背景：射擊最初只是生存工具，19世紀末才發展成為一項體育運動。

1896：第一次成為奧運項目

1904：中斷

1928：中斷

1932：重回奧運會

1968：第一次允許婦女參加奧運射擊比賽

現狀：穩步發展，1896奧運會只有三項射擊項目，現今有17項。

寫作要求

只能使用5個句子表達全部內容

評分標准

句子結構准確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

第二節 讀寫任務（共1小題，滿分25分）

閱讀下面的短文，然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.

Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it---good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students』 Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.

One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way… it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.

寫作內容

學校最近組織了一次中美學生交流活動，你參加其中的「大學校園生活」討論。聽完Mike的發言之後，你准備寫一份發言稿，題目是「Preparing Myself for College Life」，內容要點包括：

1、以約30個詞概括Mike的發言要點；

2、然後以約120個詞談談你理想的大學生活，內容包括：

（1）對中學生活的感受；

（2）理想的大學生活；

（3）中學生活和大學生活的差別，以及你打算如何適應。

寫作要求

1、在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2、作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

範文：
第一節

Shooting, at first only a means to make a living to our ancestors, became an item/event in Physical Ecation at the end of the 19th century. In the year 1896 it came into the Olympic Games but between the years 1904 and 1928 it was stopped. It was in the year 1932 that shooting came back into the Olympic family and in 1968 women athletes were allowed to take part in it for the first time. Shooting has been developed smoothly and steadily by now. In 1896 there were only 3 shooting competition items but now there are 17.

第二節

Mike』s mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there.

As for me, what I do everyday is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.

It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and mentally， and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.

As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to althood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.

重慶卷
學校網站新開設了一個「英語寫作」欄目（column），以便學生發表（post）英語作文，進行交流，提高寫作能力。現請你為該欄目寫一個英文介紹，內容包括：

1、開設目的；

2、欄目優勢：教師在線（online）指導等；

3、作文要求：內容貼近學生生活；

4、優秀作文的鼓勵辦法；

5、邀請大家參與。

注意：

1、詞數100左右；

2、開頭語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數）；

3、請在答題卡上作答。

Welcome to the column 「English Writing」!

範文：
Welcome to the columu」English Writing」!In order to improve students』 ablity of writing,let students communite with each other more conveniently and students can post their English articles easier,our school set up a new column 「English Writing」 in the Internet.

In this new column,there are many good teachers correct students』 English articles online.they will point out students』mistakes and correct them.In addition,the teachers will tell studenrs some new words,phrases and some advantage sentences to make their articles more wonderful.What』s more,if students have some mistakes of grammer,teachers will teach they patiently.

The articles which are about students』lifes are welcome.This new column encourages students to write their feeings when they see somethings in their lifes

Some good English articles will be post in the English Newsparper.And in every weekend,teachers and students will choose the top of 5 English articles. The student whose articles have been choosen 5times will be given a Free Books Card valus100 yuan.

Welcome to the columu」English Writing」 again! 」English Writing」 will be more wonderful sine you are here.

山東卷
假設你是新華中學的學生張華，班裡從外地轉來一名同學李明，他一時無法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據下列要點用英語(Q吧)給他寫封信：

1、幫他分析原因；

2、給他提出建議；

3、陳述你幫助他的具體打算。

注意：詞數120 ~150

Dear Li Ming,

Best regards,

Zhang Hua

範文：
Dear LiMing,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That』s because you are new here and people don』t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people』s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly.Last but not least, I』m always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

❽ 寫上海的英語作文

Shanghai is located in east of China, next to Jiangsu Province. Shanghai is very famous in China and even all over the world. It is the biggest city in China. And it is the commercial center of China, too. People from south and north come to here for trip and shopping. I like Shanghai very much. I like the high buildings and the convenient transport.

上海位於中國東部，毗鄰江蘇省。上海在中國甚至世界范圍內都有很高的知名度回。它是中國最大的答城市，也是中國的商業中心。全國各地的人都來這里購物觀光。 我很喜歡上海，喜歡這里的高樓大廈，還有它便捷的交通。