1. 高二英語作文如何寫
我們剛剛考完 嘿嘿
其實 英語多練聽力 聽力太好了 又練詞彙 又練句型 這些作文都能用 閱讀也有幫助 所以練習聽力不僅僅提高聽力能力的
再給你看些連詞
1)表層次:
first,firstly, to begin with, further, in the first place
second,secondly, to start with, still, furthermore
third,thirdly, what is more, last, last but not least
also, and then, next, besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addtion finally
2)表轉折；
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despitethe fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contarary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3)表因果；
therfore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence e to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4）表讓步：
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5)表遞近：
furthermore moreover likewise what is more
besides also not only...but also...
too in addtion
6)表舉例：
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7)表解釋：
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words
8)表總結：
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
namely in all therefore to summarize
就記住幾個常用的 但中等水平的又不會用的就好 作文用了添采啊~！
再給點句式
一、 the + est + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 + (that) + 主詞 + have ever + seen ( known/ heard/ had/read, etc)
例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
張老師是我曾經遇到最仁慈的教師。
二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive ecation.
沒有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎麼強調...的重要性也不為過。）
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我們再怎麼強調保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否認的...）
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否認的，我們的生活品質已經每況愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 （全世界都知道...）
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子 （毫無疑問的...）
例句：There is no doubt that our ecational system leaves something to be desired.
毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。
七、An advantage of is that + 句子（...的優點是...）
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (proce) any pollution.
使用太陽能的優點是它不會製造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子（...的原因是...）
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應我們新鮮的空氣。
九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子（如此...以致於...）
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 時間是如此珍貴，我們經不起浪費它。
十、Adj + as + Subject（主詞）+ be, S + V （雖然...）
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不}
雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質絕對令人不滿意。
十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V
The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V （愈...愈...）
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力，你愈進步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學問。
十二、By +Ving, can （借著...，..能夠..）
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。
十三、 enable + Object（受詞）+ to + V （..使..能夠..）
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。
十四、On no account can we+ V （我們絕對不能...）
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。
十五、It is time + S + 過去式 （該是...的時候了）
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
該是有關當局採取適當的措施來解決交通問題的時候了。
十六、Those who （...的人...）
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
違反交通規定的人應該受處罰。
十七、There is no one but （沒有人不...）
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
沒有人不渴望上大學。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不...）
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運動。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 （可想而知的）
It is obvious that + 句子 （明顯的）
It is apparent that + 句子 （顯然的）
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why （那就是...的原因）
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。
二十一、For the past+ 時間，S + 現在完成式...（過去...年來，...一直...）
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
過去兩年來，我一直忙著准備考試。
二十二、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自從他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V （...是值得的。）
例句：It pays to help others.
幫助別人是值得的。
二十四、ess of thee society is based on harmony.
社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V （不遺餘力的）
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我們應該不遺餘力的美化我們的環境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 （讓...明白...事）
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我們應該讓人們明白努力的價值。
二十七、be closely related to （與...息息相關）
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做運動與健康息息相關。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V （養成...的習慣）
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我們應該養成早睡早起的習慣。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/
Thanks to + N/Ving, （因為...）
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因為他的鼓勵，我終於實現我的夢想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多麼...！）
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守諾言是多麼重要的事！
三十一、Leave much to be desired （令人不滿意）
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。
三十二、Have a great influence on （對...有很大的影響）
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。
三十三、do good to （對...有益），do harm to （對...有害）
例句：Reading does good to our mind.讀書對心靈有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to （對...造成一大威脅）
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染對我們的生存造成一大威脅。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best （盡全力去...）
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我們應盡全力去達成我們的人生目標。
2. 高二英語作文範文
寫作英式英語和美式英語的差別
written English, there is not much difference in British and American English except that the Americans have improvised it whereever they could to look different. Ex. If in British English u hire a Taxi, u hire a cab in USA. I shall give u a few more examples.
British English:( See the difference in the use of tense)Riya is not at home. She has gone shopping.
American English: Riya isn't at home; she went for shopping.
In British English, the correct present perfect tense has been used but the Americans have improvised to their convenience and made it past indefinite tense. Here r some more examples for u to study in vocabulary especially.
British English American English
at the weekend on the weekend
live in X street live on X street
a player in the team a player on the team
Monday to Thursday Monday through Thursday
ten minutes past six ten minutes after six
five minutes to ten five minutes of ten
analyse analyze
cheque check (money)
centre center
colour color
defence defense
dialogue dialog
honour honor
jeweller jeweler
programme programe
metre meter
realise realize
skilful skilfull
theatre theater
traveller traveler
Aeroplane Airplane
angry mad
anywhere anyplace
biscuit cookie/cracker
There r numerous examples with me which distinguish between British English and American Emglish. In accent, the use of the vowel a is made 90% as in ash, bash. In British English there are twenty vowels(speech sounds) but in American English there r only five speech sounds. This is how they have made English more easy, useful and practical. U may post ur specific queries and I shall try to give u the best answer to the best of my ability.
唉。。。實在是找不到了，給你找半個小時了，這個是最靠譜的了！！！！
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5. 高二了，英語作文不會寫咋辦。怎麼提高英語寫作水平。
寫英語作文和寫漢語作文的要求差不多.首先要審題,按題的要求寫.想提高英語版的寫作,可以做一下權幾點.1.經常閱讀英語和漢語文章,其實,英語和漢語是不分家的,往往英語大家都是要有雄厚的漢語基礎的.2.可以多背一些英語的名言,這樣會給文章增色.還要背一些英語作文中經常用的句型.3.找幾篇不同寫作形式的範文,仔細琢磨他們是怎樣的排篇布局,然後模擬他們的格式寫幾篇文章練習一下.4.注意在寫文章的時候,因為我們仍然是漢語思維,所以往往寫出來的文章比較漢式的英語,所以,在寫作的過程中,譴詞造句一定要符合英語的語法和邏輯思維方式.
祝你的英語寫作能夠取得顯著的提高！
6. 20個適合英語寫作的好句型,高二英語
背過這些，你會發現英語作文是考試最大bug。
（一）段首句
1. 關於……人們有不同的觀點。一些人認為……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場合仍然適用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 現在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 現在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因為……，另外（而且）……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 關於……人們的觀點各不相同，一些人認為（說）……，在他們看來，……
People』s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題……，這個問題變得越來越嚴重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成為人的關注的熱門話題，特別是在年青人當中，將引發激烈的辯論。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時也引發一些嚴重的問題。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根據圖表/數字/統計數字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……，但是為什麼呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）中間段落句
1. 相反，有一些人贊成……，他們相信……，而且，他們認為……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我認為這不是解決……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。
But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……對我們國家的發展和建設是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First，______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有幾個可供我們採納的方法。首先，我們可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面臨……，我們應該採取一系列行之有效的方法來……。一方面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就應該拿出行動了。比如說……，另外……。所有這些方法肯定會……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 為什麼……？第一個原因是……；第二個原因是……；第三個原因是……。總的來說，……的主要原因是由於……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______e to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好壞兩個方面一樣，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 盡管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……這種觀點（陳述），主要理由如下：
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
（三）結尾句
1. 至於我，在某種程度上我同意後面的觀點，我認為……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
2. 總而言之，整個社會應該密切關注……這個問題。只有這樣，我們才能在將來……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
3. 但是，……和……都有它們各自的優勢（好處）。例如，……，而……。然而，把這兩者相比較，我更傾向於（喜歡）……
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
4. 就我個人而言，我相信……，因此，我堅信美好的未來正等著我們。因為……
Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I』m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
5. 隨著社會的發展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每個人都願為社會貢獻自已的一份力量，這個社會將要變得越來越好。
With the development of society, ______.So it"s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
6. 至於我（對我來說，就我而言），我認為……更合理。只有這樣，我們才能……
For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____.
7. 對我來說，我認為有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最後……但同樣重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______.
8. 在總體上很難說……是好還是壞，因為它在很大程度上取決於……的形勢。然而，就我個人而言，我發現……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______.
9. 綜上所述，我們可以清楚地得出結論……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.
10. 如果我們不採取有效的方法，就可能控制不了這種趨勢，就會出現一些意想不到的不良後果，所以，我們應該做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.
1.As far as ...is concerned 至今...被認為是...
2.It goes without saying that... 不用說...(意思是：論述的內容是顯而易見的）
3.It can be said with certainty that... 3.不用說...；...是肯定的。
4.As the proverb says 4.有句諺語是這樣說的...;常言道...
5.It has to be noticed that... 5.必須引起注意的是...
6.It`s generally recognized that... 6.通常認為...
7.It`s likely that 7.很可能...
8.It`s hardly that... 8.hardly表否定，...不被經常說起；我們很少談到...
It』s hardly too much to say that... 8.hardly表否定，...不被經常說起；我們很少談到...
What calls for special attention is that... 9.需要引起特別注意的是...
There』s no denying the fact that...10.事實不容否認...
Nothing is more important than the fact that... 11.沒有比這更重要的是...
what』s far more important is that...12.意思同上，更重要的是...
As time goes by,.....隨著時間的流逝
There is no doubt that...毫無疑問...
As far as I'm concerned, I think....就我而言，我認為...
It is said that...據說...
Two heads are better than one.三個臭皮匠，頂個諸葛亮。
It is ...that...強調句
It is important for sb to do sth.
there be句型
Compared with A, B is more ...與A相比，B更...
in my opinion 在我看來
It is high time that we did sth.是我們做..的時候了。
Only in this way, can wei solve this problem properly.只有這樣我們才能妥善解決這個問題。
sth is so...that...如此..以至於..
not only ...,but also...不僅...而且...
To be honest To tell the truth 老實說來
too..to 太..以至於不能..
On one hand,..on the other hand,..一方面..另一方面...
7. 高二英語寫作要提高有什麼辦法
高中英語作抄文主要就是積累一些經襲典的句型。
首先是要鞏固好詞彙這一關,要把高中所學的詞彙和與詞彙相關的片語鞏固牢固，不僅能夠應用，還要能夠應用。
作文重要的就是多寫多練。平時練習冊上應該有很多作文題目吧，你就拿來練手就好了。盡量自己寫，寫完之後，把自己想要用，而沒有用到的表達方式查詞典查出來，這樣多多練習，很快你就能掌握住很多常用的表達了
另外，對語法拿不準的地方，就要去找你的老師啦。我高中的時候經常自己寫完了作文，就去找老師給我改，這樣下來，很多容易錯的語法點也可以避免了。
另外可以多看一些經典的範文，老師應該會推薦說那本參考資料上的範文比較好。如果拿不準，就去找老師問問 這個是不是很不錯的範文，一般比較權威的資料上的範文，都還是不錯的 可以借鑒。不必死背，多讀多看，主要是看它的句型和一些片語的應用。
祝你成功哦~ 有問題給我留言吧~
8. 高二英語必修五作文範文10篇帶翻譯
1. How to spend my weekend
Iam going to prepare for my lessons because the Mid-term exam is coming. I am sure if I have good preparation, I will get good grades. I am going to help my parents do some housework because they work hard every day.Of course I will visit my good friend and play table tennis with him because doing sports is good for our health. I will surf the internet and listen to music because they are good ways to relax. I am sure I will have a busy and meaningful weekend. 我打算復習功課，因為期中考試即將到來，我相信如果做好充足的准備，我一定會取得好成績的。我打算幫父母做些家務，因為他們整天忙於工作。當然了，我要拜訪我最好的朋友並和他一起打乒乓球，因為做運動有益於身體健康。我要上網並聽音樂，因為他們是最好的放鬆方式。我肯定我會過一個忙而有意思的周末的。
2 How to learn English well
Learning English just like learning any other language, is hard work so my first advice is to spend much time practicing using English every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Go over what is learnt regularly and finish doing our homework carefully. Listen to English radio programmes, read English stories and newspapers, watch English films and TV programmes ,keep a diary in English and attend English debbates and speech contests. If we make mistakes, correct them at once and try not to make the same mistakes. What's more, we should look up new words in the dictionary before class and prepare each lesson carefully before class. I believe if we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will learn English well.學習英語就象學習其他語言一樣是艱辛的。因此我的第一個建議是每天花多點時間練習使用英語。除此之外，我們應該上課認真聽講、記筆
9. 如何提高英語寫作水平我都上高二了。急啊！！！
高考英語作文最高檔寫作要求：1、高級句型 2、高級詞彙 3、過渡語
寫作訓練對策：
1、背誦回經答典佳句。積累寫作佳句，背誦並默寫。
2、背誦小短文。學習過渡語和經典用詞。
3、仿寫。模仿高中課文，進行仿寫縮寫擴寫訓練。
4、句式訓練。積累模仿各種經典英語寫作句式，使句式結構豐富多樣。如：定語從句、倒裝句、There be 句型、非謂語動詞等。
詳細內容學習請參考*60分鍾高考英語提分秘訣*
10. 高二英語寫作有什麼提分的方法嗎
對於作文，我說的最多的就是：不走尋常路！你不要以為在網上下載那些所謂的優秀作文，拿來背背，你就成為高手了，其實大錯特錯！因為我看了之後也覺得一般，甚至有些拙劣，嘩眾取寵的味道，比如有的所謂優秀作文竟然還用什麼be good at，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion，completely這樣低等的寫作詞彙，說它低等，那是因為這些詞彙已經廣為人知，閱卷老師已經看的麻木不仁了
要寫出高人一等的作文，我覺得並不難，只要你有一定的語法基礎和一定量的寫作詞彙（越高級越好），寫作句型，就足可以應對常規的高考，四六級考試……（我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個級別，四六級的作文都是110多分）
首先是語法，在你的語法達到一定層次之後，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番！
其次，是詞彙，我覺得，在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞彙取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什麼變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙！給你打個比方吧，很多想到「許多」就用many，但是你別忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到「專家」就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到「擅長」這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上！
再次，是怎麼將文章潤色，從而使你的文章大放異彩！！關於這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」，包括如下幾個方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處，那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver』s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver『s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最後，我建議各位，平時讀報，或者做題的時候，發現有好的句子好的詞彙，你要抄下來，長期下來，你的作文會有提高的，需要說明的是，這個提高過程可能很緩慢，但是最後能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個級別，靠的就是對語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級的詞彙，句型，句子。