『壹』 談談對旅遊中不文明現象英語作文 高考水平
It have been discussed for a long time that how to deal with the uncivilized behaviors ring the travel, such as write on the place of historic interests, or claim to old trees. This kind of things happened in China more often than any other countries. What can we do to prevent those actions? Though we have advocate ecation of the tourists for years, the situation was not better than be imagined. In my opinion, we still have to encourage the ecation of our tourists, but with some change. For example, we should not only disseminate 「Don』t Do Sth.」, but also with the reason and an explanation that it is not cool to sign names or words everywhere, in the contrary, we have to ashamed of that. Make a comparison between foreigners and us can also increase our consciousness.
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness ①immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
①Immoral behaviors in public ②initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ③sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people's rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of① this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ②implementation and ③cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect 「A World without Thieves". Everyone ①shares the huge responsibility of ②demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路點評：
作文要求第一點，相關經歷
◇語言點提示：
① immoral behavior in public：直接點題
◇第二段思路點評：
不文明行為的影響
◇語言點提示：
① immoral behavior in public：重復名詞片語，與第一段銜接
② initiate：意思是「產生，發動」
③sense of social responsibility：意思是「社會責任感」
◇第三段思路點評：
如何改善這些現象
◇語言點提示：
① this phenomenon：指代前文「immoral behavior in public」，與上文銜接，且避免重復
②implementation：意為「執行，實施」
③cost effectiveness：意為「成本效率」
④ common good：意為「公益」
◇第四段思路點評：
總結
◇語言點提示：
①share a huge responsibility: 意為「承擔重大責任」
②demonstrate：意為「展現」