㈠ 高中英語寫作技巧:人物介紹作文怎麼寫
技巧點撥:
1. 仔細審題,確定主題。
2.合理安排短文的結構層次,組織好所提示內容表達的先後順序。
3.句子時態要在上下文中有相關性、連續性,要與表達內容一致。
4.審題後要先列出簡明扼要的提綱,其次寫出草稿,經過修改之後,再正式成文。
常見可運用句型:
sb. is considered to be one of the greatest ...
Well known as ..., he ...
Born in a poor family, he had to ...
When he was a small boy, he showed a great interest in ...
Thanks to the help of ..., he was able to continue his ecation.
Between ... and ..., he studied at ...
From ... to ..., he first worked as ..., and then he became ...
He was praised/honored for ...
She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to ...
She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievements.
His achievements are worthy of praise.
㈡ 高中英語寫作技巧
一是通過詞彙教學訓練寫作能力。要寫好文章不是一朝一夕就能達到的,必須從最基礎的詞彙入手。擴大詞彙量,讓你詞不離句,強化寫作訓練。
二是通過一句多譯練習訓練寫作能力。多做一些一句多譯練習,這樣有助於啟發寫作思路。寫作時選擇自己有把握的句子靈活地表達同一內容,減少失誤,提高得分率。
三是結合課文進行各種體裁的寫作訓練。要學好英語寫作就必須從課文練起,從一些常見的文體練起,由短到長,由淺入深,循序漸進地進行。
四是通過背誦訓練寫作。培養英語寫作能力,以文章為中心訓練寫作能力非常重要,因為文章中的句子就是規范的英語範文。把詞語放在句型、段落、篇章中去理解、記憶和體味,以至於能夠仿寫、改寫。
五是通過仿寫和改寫訓練寫作能力。仿寫也是提高英語寫作能力行之有效的方法,模仿寫作中,格式、構思、表達方式等方面都可模仿。但要注意靈活變通,語句要通順,符合英語表達習慣。
另外,改寫也是一種很好的方法,改寫就是對文章材料的文體、式樣、句式等進行改編的一種訓練方式。無論是改人稱、改時態,還是改對話材料為敘述文字,這都有助於復習鞏固所學知識,又能培養你所學知識的遷移運用能力,還能起到提高寫作能力。
我之前學的那個網路寫作班,你也可以去申請一個免費的寫作資料啊~報名還贈送語法講座視頻和電子英語雜志,挺好的啊~希望可以幫到你~
㈢ 求高中英語寫作技巧和一些有用短語,句式
Chapter One 文章開頭句型
1-1 對立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然後提出自己的看法或者偏向於某一看法,
適用於有爭議性的主題.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently.
當被問及····,大多數人認為|說·····但是我有點不這麽認為。
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people bielive that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
當它涉及·····一些人相信·····其他人主張相反的觀點。在這些觀點里,有可能有一部分是真的,但是我傾向於前者或後者····
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
現在,大家普遍認為·····他們主張·····但是我懷疑····是否······
1-2 現象法 引出要剖析的現象或者問題, 然後評論 .
e.g
[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.
最近,·····問題(現象)的逐漸嚴重已經引起廣泛的關注。
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)
大意同上
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
通貨膨脹|腐敗|社會不平等·····是另外一個新的令人感到苦澀的我們不得不學會去面對的一個事實。
1-3 觀點法 ----開門見山,直接了當地提出自己對要討論的問題的看法.
e.g:
[1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. benn more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
現在,越來越多人開始認為(意識到)·····
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation to the necessity to......Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
大意同上
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
也許,是時侯對······觀點擁有新的認識。
1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 來引出文章要展開論述的觀點!
e.g:
[1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people .
「知識就是力量」這句是培根的名言。這句名言已經被廣泛的接受。
"Ecation is not complete with gralation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.
「教育不是完成於畢業」這句是美國一位著名的哲學家所說的。越來越多的人接受這句話。
[2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .
「······」我們經常聽到這樣的話。
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
在我們的日常生活中,我們習慣於聽到如此傳統得解釋「·······」。
[3]As the saying goes that"````````"
正如某句名言說的「······」
1-5 比較法 ------ 通過對過去,現在 兩種不同的傾向,觀點的比較 , 引出文章要討論的觀點.
e.g:
[1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new.
人們過去常常認為·····但是現在人們持這個觀點。
1-6 故事法 ---- 先講一個較短的故事來引發讀者的興趣, 引出文章的主題.
e.g:
[1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenemenon of ... has aroused public concern.
這個現象激發人們的公共意識。
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.
如此進退兩難的局面是我們日常生活中經常面對的。
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now.
很久以前,·······也許這個故事令人難以置信,但它仍有重大的現實意義
1-8 問題法 ----- 先用討論或解答的設問, 引出自己觀點, 適用於有爭議性的話題.
e.g:
Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...
But in my opinion , ...... .
Chapter 2 文章中間主體內容句型
原因結果分析
2-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物時, 用此句型說明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
e.g:
[1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ... 為什麼·····?第一·····第二·····
[2]. The answer to this problem involes many factors. For one thing... For another...... Still another ...
這個問題的答案涉及到許多因素。第一·····第二·····另外·······
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect .... /both indivial and social contribute to ....
許多因素,包括物質上的和精神上的·····個人原因都能導致·····
2-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之後, 再補充一個次要的或者更重要時用!
e.g:
[1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....當然,······不是·····的唯一因素
2-3 後果影響 --------- 分析某事物可能造成的後果或者帶來的影響 .
e.g:
[1]. It will proce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
Chapter 3 文章結尾形式
3-1 結論性--------- 通過對文章前面的討論 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及觀點 .
e.g:
[1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .....
從以上所討論的,我們確實可以得出·····的結論。
[2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......
3-2 後果性------ 揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產生的嚴重後果.
e.g:
[1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .......
我們必須提出一個緊急方案,因為當前的····現象,如果被允許進行,將理所當然的導致·····的重大代價\花費
[2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger.
明顯的,如果我們對這個問題視而不見,····將有更大的可能被置於危險之中。
3-3 號召性 -------- 呼籲讀者行動起來, 採取行動或提請注意.
e.g:
[1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ......
是我們促使將不好的趨勢結束的時候。
[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.
有效的措施被用來改變這傾向是必須的。
3-4 建議性 -------- 對所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法.
e.g:
[1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is .....
[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.
對這問題的察覺\認識是面對這種情況的第一步。
3-5 方向性的結尾方式 ---- 其與建議性的唯一差別就是對問題解決提出總的, 大體的方向或者指明前景.
e.g:
[1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .
make some sense:有意義,講得通,有道理
[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/benefical.
[3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........
3-6 意義性的結尾方式 --------> 文章結尾的時候,從更高的更新的角度指出所討論的問題的重要性以及其深遠的意義!
e.g:
[1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit .....but also benefit .....
[2]. In any case, whether it is posotive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly ..
一)比較
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...
二)原因
1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...
Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
Perhaps the primary factor is that …
But the fundamental cause is that ...
三)後果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it proces is ...
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
四)批駁
1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ...
7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...
五)舉例
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ...
3) Such examples might be given easily.
4) ...is often cited as an example.
六)證明
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...
七)開篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...
8) According to a recent survey, ...
9) With the rapid development of ..., ...
八)結尾
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...
4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...
5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.
6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...
7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...
10) Taking all these into account, we ...
11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
1)With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up
2)When it comes to...,some people think /believe……that...,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably……some truth in both arguments/statements,but...當說到……,有些人認為……,但另一些人則持相反的觀點……。這兩種觀點可能都有點道理,但……。
㈣ 如何寫好高中英語作文,有什麼寫作技巧嗎
寫作在英語學習中是培養和提高語言能力的有效手段,它有助於鞏固和掌握所學詞彙、語法等語言知識,有助於訓練直接用所學語言進行思維,有利於提高駕馭語言的能力.中學生該如何寫好英語作文呢?
工具/原料
英語寫作的基本知識
所給材料達的信息和要求
方法/步驟
1.認真審題立意
文章要有明確的主題,必須具備4個條件:准確、鮮明、深刻、集中.以作文「The English teacher I Admire Most」為例,文章的主題是關於記敘我最欣賞的一位英語老師,因而就不能泛泛談論老師這一職業或自己的幾位老師.
2.草擬提綱
文章布局要做好3件事:安排好層次段落,鋪設好過渡,處理好開頭和結尾.如命題作文中有提示句,還要從提示句的關鍵詞出發,圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路,發揮聯想,記錄下聯想到的東西,可以是句子或單詞片語,可以是英語或漢語.仍以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例,提綱可以這樣寫:
1)Who is the English teacher I admire most
2) My reasons
3) What can I learn from the teacher
3.寫出落主題句,理文章之脈絡
一篇短文的段落一般分為引導段、主題段和結尾段.每段的主題句非常重要,是作者思維的起點,切題的准繩,闡述的對象.看到段落主題句,讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內容.段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔明了的單句.通常將段落主題句置於段落的開頭,可使文章結構更清晰,有說服力.
4.參照提綱,緊扣主題句,完成各段落
有了段落主題句後,還需要順著段落主題句的方向,參照提綱中的思路,從而完成各個段落.引導段要能引起讀者的注意和興趣,為主題段鋪路架橋.主題段應圍繞文章和該段的主題來展開.展開的方式包括:順序法、舉例法、比較法、對比法、說明法、因果法、推導法、歸納法,和下定義等.可以根據需要任選一種或幾種方式.還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例,主題段中就能用到舉例法、說明法、因果法等.
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㈤ doc 怎樣給高中生上英語寫作課
一次作來文課的成功不源能說明什麼,關鍵是如何將這種成功變成一種永遠的成功,變成學生在英語作文方面的可持續性發展,那就得在評改的形式上下功夫.
評改英語作文可以採取多種形式相結合,教師批改,優生批改,學生互相批改.這好比一大樹,教師批改是樹干,決定樹木的直立成長,優生批改是樹枝,可以幫助主幹獲得更多能量,學生互相批改是樹葉,可以在最大范圍內獲得陽光.因此在學生完成作文後,我先讓學生在小組內互相修改,互相學習,再去請一位比自己優秀的同學作自己個別指導,然後我隨機抽取幾位同學的作文打出投影讓大家來評議,作出總結
㈥ 高中英語作文技巧
多背範文,復積累好的短語詞制匯。其實作文真的沒有什麼技巧可言,只要你讀的多,積累的多了。自然能順手拈來。平常可以多讀一些英文報紙、雜志之類的。還有是要保證准確,如果一些復雜的句型用不好就不要用。這是我個人的一些經驗,希望能幫到你。
㈦ 如何有效進行高中英語 寫作教學.ppt 全文免費在
我們該如何進行有效地進行英語寫作教學?如何批改他們的英語作文才能有效提高他們的寫作水平?以下我提出幾點自己的看法:一、提高英語寫作課堂教學的效率及學生寫作水平的對策 1.重視寫作,堅持抓好寫作教學 英語寫作是英語語言的一種綜合性表達方式,它涉及到用詞、造句、語法知識、邏輯思維等。學生要想掌握這門技巧,必須經過長期有系統、有計劃、有步驟的嚴格訓練。在教學中應充分利用教材中出現的詞彙、句型及語法,把詞彙教學、句型教學和語法教學相結合來訓練學生的英語表達能力,始終做到詞不離句,寓句型和語法教學於句子之中,提高學生造句能力。2.強抓基本功,扎牢基礎英語屬於結構語言,有著自己的固定短語,習慣用語和基本句型。這就要求我們在日常教學中加強學生對這些基本功的操練,讓學生牢記五種基本句型:s+v;s+v+o;s+v+o+o;s+v+o+c;s+v+p,並對這五種基本句型進行不斷的強化和拓展練習,對學生進行英語表達的基本語感訓練。3.重視仿寫訓練,提高表達能力。要注重仿寫的針對性和目的性,教師可以根據學生的具體情況進行安排。教師講解範文時應系統分析文章的內容、意義、篇章結構和寫作技巧等。在練習前,要給學生一些適當的提示。要指導學生學會用英語打腹稿,邊構思、邊將關鍵詞和短語記下來,鼓勵學生在寫作時一氣呵成。4.注重多樣化英語寫作訓練在學生掌握了最基本的寫作技巧和能力後,我們如果想要進一步提高學生的英語寫作能力,就不能再一味的進行仿寫訓練,不然會抹殺學生的寫作個性,出現英語寫作的單一化!聽、說、讀、寫四種技能是互相依賴、相輔相成的。要在獲得足夠輸入量的基礎上保證學生的輸出能力。因此,寫作訓練要與對話教學、閱讀教學、聽力教學等緊密結合。學過對話課以後,可讓學生把對話改成一段短文。在進行課文閱讀教學、培養學生閱讀能力的同時,對學生進行多種形式的寫作技能訓練,培養學生初步運用英語進行書面交際的能力(包括聽寫能力、造句能力、組詞成句與組句成篇能力、書面概括能力等)。聽力練習後,採用寫的方式鞏固聽的學習效果,讓他們以此練習作為線索將聽到的內容寫到作文本上,聽與寫的結合訓練可促進學生書面表達能力的提高。5.注重學生的主體學習和教師的指導相結合因為英語和漢語的表達方式不盡相同,教師若不進行指導,就會出現大量的中國式英語(chinglish)我們應在教學中體現學生的主體作用,指導學生的寫作訓練:(1).指導他們如何擴大詞彙量和英語習語;(2).教他們掌握英語基本句型,尤其是動詞句型;(3).教他們動筆前如何分析材料、審題;(4).教他們利用已知的知識背景;(5).教他們用不同的詞和結構表達思想(6).教他們如何評品一篇作文;(7).教他們閱讀時記筆記。上述每一件事都由學生完成,能極有效地提高學生的寫作能力。教師的指導作用表現在決定學生該干什麼,指導學生該如何干,糾正學生的錯誤。即使是新詞和易錯的詞的選擇、語法的學習,教師也只是提出問題,引起學生的有意注意,然後自己通過討論和查找資料來自己解決問題。讓學生既能學到新知識和技能發揮自己的主體作用,使學生體會到寫作的樂趣! 6.學生自我評估和教師點評相結合,促進學生寫作水平的全面提高。要有意識地引導和幫助學生對自己的英語習作進行恰當的自我評估。成文後的評估應從主題是否突出,有無中心句,段落安排是否得當,語言是否流暢地道,是否有拼寫錯誤或重復使用詞語和表達方式的現象,文章的開頭和結尾是否合理,文章是否有條理、有邏輯等方面去衡量作文的寫作質量,讓學生再過程中學會自我評估。二.英語寫作答題技巧1、仔細審題,弄清大意。審題是寫作的關鍵所在,仔細審題才能深刻理解題目所要表達的主要意思。不論是漢語提示寫作還是看圖寫作,都要仔細審題,弄清寫作內容,如背景、人物、時間、體裁等的要求。 2、編寫提綱,擬出要點。 在弄清了題目所要表達的主要意思後,便可根據主要內容列出提綱,即整理出內容要點。清理要點的目的就是為了把握短文的脈絡,不至於遺漏內容的要點。 3、緊扣要點,擴寫成文。 要列出要點後,依據要點擴寫成文。可運用想像適度發揮,但切記不可隨意亂寫,要緊扣畫面或漢語提示,適當描述,連貫通順即可,不能把漢語提示全部譯成英語。 4、反復檢查,修正錯誤。 擴寫成文後,考生應將擴寫後的文章認真讀一讀,檢查是否有錯誤。在檢查時,著重看短文是否扣住了提示或圖畫的內容,要點是否有遺漏。同時,還要注意有無語法錯誤,如時態、人稱等,是否符合文體特點、格式等等。 5、寫作,要注意留夠時間,一般需要15-20分鍾。寫作時,最好能先打草稿,這樣可以減少錯誤,書寫也比較清晰工整,作文要注意內容要點全面,語言通順,提倡用簡單的詞、句來寫,適當用復雜結構。總之,英語寫作是一種學生綜合能力的書面體現,是一個長期復雜的訓練過程。因此,培養學生的寫作能力不能一蹴而就,我們應在平時的英語寫作教學中從學生的實際水平出發,有目的、有計劃、有要求、有檢查、有反饋地進行,由易到難,循序漸進。只有這樣,才能提高英語寫作課堂教學的效率,促使學生寫作能力的提升達到英語新課標的要求,在中、高考時才能做到厚積薄發、思如泉湧、下筆如有神。
㈧ 高中英語作文寫作技巧
剛參加過高考~~絕對有用(總結了很久)
①給觀點分組討論類 開頭模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****(根據題目要求套用了)
論述觀點 when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that **** ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they consider that ***
結尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****
②一些精彩亮點連接詞 in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore
moreover(另外)
last but not least important ,most important (最重要的是)
worst of all (最糟糕的是),
to make matters wores(更糟的是)
as far as i concerned, personally(我個人看來)
however ,nevertheless(然而)
希望對你學習有用!
參考資料:自己咯~
㈨ 高考英語寫作技巧是什麼
1
改變句子開頭方式
在通常情況下,英語句子的排列方式為「主語+謂語+賓語」,即主語位於句子開頭。但若根據情況適當改變句子的開頭方式,比如使用倒狀語或以狀語開頭等,會使文章增強表現力。
· We can protect the environment only in this way.
→ Only in this way can we protect the environment.
只有這樣我們才能保護好環境。
· A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。
2
用詞要豐富
為了使表達更生動,更富表現力,同學們在寫作時應盡量避免重復使用同一詞語來表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學一看到「喜歡」二字,就會立刻想起like,事實上,英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。
· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜歡看書,而我的兄弟卻喜歡看電視。
·Thank you very much for your help.
→ I really appreciate your help.
很感激你幫助我。
3
合理使用省略句
恰當地使用省略句,不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔,而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。
· He may be busy. If he』s busy, I』ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I』ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是這樣,我以後再來拜訪。要是不忙,我現在可以見他嗎?
· She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn』t.
她本可申請這份工作的,但她沒有。
4
運用非謂語結構
非謂語結構通常被認為是一種高級結構,適當運用非謂語結構,會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。
· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。
· As I didn』t know her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn』t able to get in touch with her.
由於不知道她的地址,我沒法和她聯系。
·The baby was accompanied by her mother and it got quiet immediately.
→ Accompanied by her mother, the baby got quiet immediately.
有媽媽的陪伴,寶寶很快
5
結合使用長、短句
在英語寫作中,過多地使用長句或過多地使用短句都不好。正確的做法是,根據實際情況在文章中交替使用長句與短語,使文章顯得錯落有致,這樣不僅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章讀起來鏗鏘有力。
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我們曬著太陽吃野餐。休息一會兒後,我們唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,還有的講笑話、下棋,大家玩得很開心。
6
使用短語代替單詞
一味使用單詞也會讓閱卷老師產生審美疲勞,適當地用一些常見的的片語和短語,也能讓文章閃亮起來。
· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已決定長大了當老師。
· He doesn't like music.
→ He doesn't care much for music.
→ He shows no interest in music.
他不大喜歡音樂。
· Jim is very smart. He always gets new ideas.
→ Jim is very smart. He always comes up with new ideas.
吉姆很聰明,他總是能想出新的點子。
· The students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→ The students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
學生們認為應該省出一些零花錢來買書。
7
套用某些固定表達
好的固定表達能讓你的文章顯得不那麼生硬。
· He was very tired. He couldn』t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
這電影很有趣,學生和老師都很喜歡。
· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的兒子已經長大,可以自己照顧自己了。
8
使用地道英語。我們只能寫地道的英語。
· Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.
→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.
別擔心,大膽試一試,你很快就會學會的。
· Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
謝謝你陪我玩。
9
合理使用「高級」結構
使用一兩句定語從句,名詞性從句或狀語從句等高級的句型,能給文章增色不少。
· This is the factory. We visited it last week.
→ This is the factory which/that we visited last week.
這就是我們上周參觀的工廠。
· We work hard. And we will make progress.
→As long as we work hard, we will make progress.
只要我們努力工作,我們就會進步的。
10
引用名言警句點綴
在寫作時根據實際情況恰當地用上一兩句名言警句來點綴文章,不僅使文章顯得有深度、有智慧,而且會讓文章在評分中上一個「得分檔次」。
· As the proverb says, 「Where there is a will, there is a way.」 Though you fail this time, you needn』t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
正如俗語所說:「有志者,事竟成。」 雖然這次你失敗了,但你沒必要灰心。只要你努力工作。堅持夢想,總有一天你會成功的。
· There is a proverb going like this, 「Life isn』t a bed of roses.」 It is true that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
有句俗語是這樣說的:「生活不是玫瑰花床。」每個人在生活中很可能在生活中遇到問題和困難,這是真的。
· In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, 「A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.」
在當代世界,越來越多的人獨自生活,這對我們的生命是不太好的。我們最好多交朋友,享受友誼。正如俗話所說:「遠親不如近鄰。」
怎麼樣,你學會了嗎?祝你英語寫作得高分!
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