1. 如何保證雅思寫作的文章連貫性
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內在的邏輯性，後者指的是使用轉換詞語。當然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內在的有機的聯系;反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。每個人的情況不同，也可以登錄文都國際教育官網進行一對一的咨詢。
1、意連
段落中句子的排列應遵循一定的次序，不能想到什麼就寫什麼。如果在下筆之前沒有構思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A.按時間先後排列(chronological arrangement)
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was
obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew
the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then,
when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours ----- it
must have been close to noon ---- the heat nearly hid us in; the
radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to
cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was four o'clock
and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the
tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in
the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very
nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him.
By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we
knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky
day.
本段從"rose"(起床)寫起，然後是吃早餐("not to miss breakfast", "closing at nine o'clock")，然後是"close to noon"，一直寫到這一天結束("By nine--")。
B.按位置遠近排列(spatial arrangement)
例如：From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got
closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all
right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were
also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a
pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten
feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of
glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was
made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had
four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a
steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light
changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and
we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠及近，從遠處("from a distance")寫起，然後"get closer"，再到(" ten feet
away")，最後是"inside the pagoda"……當然，按位置遠近來寫不等於都是由遠及近。根據需要，也可以由近及遠，由表及裡等等。
C.按邏輯關系排列(logical arrangement)
a.按重要性順序排列(arrangement insgroupsof importance)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much
skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine,
your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as
soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends
on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word.
And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the
organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be
that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In
the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the
large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is
perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達能力，它的重要性與職業，身份有關，從"not need much skill"或"of little importance"到"more important"，最後是"most important"。
b.由一般到特殊排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been
careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any
number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the
reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what
it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the
reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has
switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader
loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps
sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A ---- the writer, in whose
head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing
link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not
taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and
"sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big
one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然後通過5個"perhaps"加以例證。
c.由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-general arrangement)
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with
the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in
breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not
possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her
independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff
unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed,
perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand,
loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till
night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who
saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually
offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable,
on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds,
drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is
imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什麼兩只貓會被搞混。然後對兩者進行比較，末句才下結論。
2、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當的轉換詞語及其他手段來實現。請讀下面這一段文字並找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First,
though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his
efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math.
Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient
in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects
besides those he had chosen. As a result, ring his junior year of
high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had
to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graate on
schele. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward
realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉換詞語(transitional words or
phrases)，另一種是起轉換作用的其他連接手段(linking devices)。前者依次有：first, though, so, in
particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and,
consequently, and, finally.後者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he,
those, his, he, these,
his.本段1有詞彙105個，所使用的轉換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞彙量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流暢(smoothness)有益，而且對於學生在規定時間內寫足所要求的字數也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000
years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented
only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word
choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent
often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are
ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in
the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture,
loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture,
loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and
writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現一個起過渡作用的"it"之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現許多重復的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on
sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was
developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent
development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is
usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is
often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell
where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard
diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies
on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing
lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the
differences.
有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經常出現下面幾種錯誤：
1)不必要的改變時態，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where
he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes
refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to
die down, but they come after him anyway.
2)不必要的改變單復數，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy.
But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run
out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the
deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3)不必要的改變人稱，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's
activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in
the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members
will do things together and know one another. You need to give up
isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of
obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態，人稱以及數的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
2. 幫忙修改下英語作文 特別是語法，是連貫性
One day ,a little boy and his mother were sitting on the bus.An old woman got on the bus.
There were no seat left for the old woman .A young man smoking on the chair pretended to haven't seen the old woman .''hi ,sit here!'',by saying this , All passengers took a look at the litlle boy ,when he pulling the old woman to his seat .
All passengers smiled at the little boy, and the little boy felt happy
3. 如何寫好英語作文啊
英語寫作能力也是靈活運用知識的一種綜合能力。
1.中國有句古話，叫"熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作"。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發揮。
2.可以採用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然後到寫幾句話，最後到寫流利的文段。
3.嘗試多種形式的寫作，如簡訊、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據表格或記錄寫短文等。
4.在練習時，要充分了解所提供的情景素材，注意使用常見的連接詞來表示順序和邏輯關系，使句意表達
連貫、語法正確、符合邏輯。還要注意字母的大小寫和標點符號。
怎樣寫好英語作文
1．認真審題立意，定文章之靈魂對命題作文必須認真審題，對自由作文必須立好意。文章要有明確的主題，必須具備4個條件：准確、鮮明、深刻、集中。
2．草擬提綱，打造文章之骨架審好題，立好意後，就要寫提綱，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好層次段落，鋪設好過渡，處理好開頭和結尾。如命題作文中有提示句，還要從提示句的關鍵詞出發，圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路，發揮聯想，記錄下聯想到的東西，可以是句子或單詞片語，可以是英語或漢語。
3．寫出段落主題句，理文章之脈絡一篇短文的段落一般分為引導段、主題段和結尾段。每段的主題句非常重要，是作者思維的起點，切題的准繩，闡述的對象。看到段落主題句，讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內容。段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置於段落的開頭，可使文章結構更清晰，有說服力。
4．參照提綱，緊扣主題句，完成各段落，充文章之血肉
有了段落主題句後，還需要順著段落主題句的方向，參照提綱中的思路，從而完成各個段落。引導段要能引起讀者的注意和興趣，為主題段鋪路架橋。主題段應圍繞文章和該段的主題來展開。展開的方式包括：順序法、舉例法、比較法、對比法、說明法、因果法、推導法、歸納法，和下定義等。可以根據需要任選一種或幾種方式。
5.進行這一步驟還需注意三方面問題： 1）確保提綱中段落結構的思路與各段主題句的一致性。只有這樣，才能保證所寫段落不偏題，不跑題。 2）要綜合考慮各個段落的內容安排，避免段落內容的交叉。 3）用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。要做到所寫文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，就需要在句與句之間，段與段之間架起一座座橋梁，而連接詞起的正是橋梁作用。
增加文采小竅門:
如果說第一、二步是對文章的構思，第三、四步驟則是真正地「寫」了，用詞是否貼切，文法是否正確，句式是否多變，文采是否有生氣，關繫到寫作者的語言功底和水平，但也有些竅門，以下這幾點可以供你參考。
1．在整篇文章中，避免只是用一兩個句式，要靈活運用各種句式。如倒裝句、強調句、省略句、主從復合句、對比句、分詞短語、介詞短語等。
2．使用不同長度的句子，通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現力。
3．改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味以主、謂、賓、狀的次序。可以把狀語置於句首，或用分詞短語等。
4．學會使用過渡詞。如： 1）遞進：furthermore,moreover,besides,inaddition,thenetc. 2）轉折：however,but,nevertheless,afteralletc. 3）總結：finally,atlast,inbrief,toconclude 4）強調：really,indeed,certainly,surely,abovealletc. 5）對比：inthesameway,justas,ontheotherhand,etc.
5．避免重復使用同一單詞或片語。
6．注意運用固定片語、習語、諺語來代替一些詞表達意思，以增加文采。
把好檢查最後一關
1．是否切題分三點看：一是整篇文章內容是否切合文章標題要求；二是段落主題句的內容是否與各段落提示句內容相一致；三是段落內部的內容是否與段落主題句的表達相一致。如果發現任何一個層面不切題，應該盡可能彌補，刪除那些多餘的或不切題的地方，但切忌動「大手術」。
2．是否連貫檢查上下文是否連貫，句子銜接是否自然流暢，檢驗的標准主要是句子是否通暢，該用連詞的地方用了沒有，所用的連詞是否合適。
3．是否有語法錯誤主謂是否一致，動詞的時態、語態、語氣的使用是否正確，片語的搭配是否合乎習慣。還是以「The English Teacher I Admire Most」為例，根據此標題，文章肯定用第一人稱「I」寫，一般性的描述用現在時，舉過去的事例用過去時。
4．是否有大小寫、拼寫、標點錯誤，注意卷面整潔要提高寫作水平，最根本是要大量實踐，必須多讀多寫，注意博覽和精讀相結合，甚至可以適當背誦一些名句名篇。另外，還可選些範文，悉心領悟，多加模仿，以逐步達到運用自如。
4. 英語作文寫作的技巧誰能告訴我啊
1 簡單句型一定得全對
2 背幾個高級句型，像什麼定語從句，獨立主格結構，爭取每次寫作都用上
3 開頭和結尾一定要精簡
就基本有高分了
5. 英語作文怎麼寫（比如語法的基本連接之類的）
很多同學想尋求一個在短時間內提高英語寫作水平的方法，但據專家分析很難實現。英語學習是一個長期積累的過程，短時間內只能會捨本逐末、杯水車薪。但是我們可以通過掌握考試規律來調整臨考狀態、提高應考能力。
首先要休息好。很多同學都會在臨考前進入臨考狀態，經常的表現就是夜不能寐。通宵達旦的熬夜，其實這對於像四六級考試這樣的考試而言是百害而無一益的。因為四六級考試對於每個學生來說，不僅是一次英語水平的綜合測試，也是一種意志力、甚至是體力的考驗。沒有良好的休息，考生很難笑到最後。所以，保證充足的睡眠是必要的。
然後是營養。參加四級考試的同學，早餐要定時定量，不可或缺。對於那些體質虛弱的同學可以服用一些營養品，不過，安眠葯等有副作用的葯物要慎用，否則過有不及。
心理因素也很重要。隨著四六級考試的改革的深入，會有更多、更新的題目，包括作文題目的出現，這就要求我們處驚不變。即使出現未料到的題型，考生也要及時調整好心態、從容不迫地應答。事實和經驗表明：題目要求越高，難度越大，考生發揮的餘地也越大。
要熟悉老師的評分習慣，考生可以正常甚至超常發揮自身水平。評分重點在於文章的結構和語言水平。除此以外，有「兩個基本點」即閃光點和語法點。比較好的範文中，我們可以看到像提問法、諺語總結法、從句、並列句、理由段公式、理由詞彙、路線句型、插入語、名詞化以及被動語態等閃光點，而在一篇低分例文中，基本的語言錯誤則多的數不勝數。
審題。在落筆前花費三分鍾時間進行思考，可以利於理清行文思路，避免差之毫釐、失之千里。尤其在應對圖表累作文，要看清圖表，把握好各個數據的變化和相互關系。
卷面。作為作文這種主觀題來講，考生與閱卷老師是彼此互動、相互影響的一個考生可以做的，首先是通過卷面給閱卷老師下意識地傳達這個信息。用筆的顏色（深藍色使人心情放鬆愉快）、粗細（粗線條給人以安全感），整齊劃一的格式（段首或一律頂格或一律空兩格），明了的段落感（每段空一行），清晰的字數感（一行以十字位宜），工整的字跡都會給任何閱讀者留下深刻的正面印象，從而使考生先發制人、取得先機。
表達。言之無文，行而不遠。語言作為評分原則中的基本要素之一，在四六級作文評分的整個過程中具有決定性作用。有評分老師甚至斷言： 「It is not what you say, it is the way that you say it.」（重要的並不在於考生寫了些什麼，而在於考生是怎麼表達的。）雖然這種說法本身似乎有失偏頗，可是參加過國際標准化英語考試的同學應該也聽說過那麼一句話，叫做： 「Give the monkey exactly what he wants.」（給閱卷老師最想要的。），不是嗎？譬如同樣是描述數據，一些同學拘泥於圖表本身，動輒按部就班地引用圖表上現成的數字和年代，其實這都是圖表作文的忌諱。聰明的同學引而不用，他們常喜歡用倍數、分數、小數、百分比、或者一些動詞（double / triple / quadruple）來表現極端數據，動態數據以及他們的相異之處。
檢查。行百里者半九十。一篇成功的作文少不了反復推敲、一再修改。然而，由於考試時間和條件等諸多因素的限制，考生絕對需要慎重對待作文的檢查和修改。這里，我不得不提考生檢查作文時的三大「通病」，即，數字數、孤芳自賞、和做結構與內容上的修改。我們必須明確：考試作文的潤色和修改只需要達到三個目的即可：1. 拼寫正確，看文章中是否有漢字、多餘符號、糊亂塗改、劃線、和錯別字；2. 搭配正確；和3. 語法正確，特別是人稱、時態、和單復數的三"一致"。我們在實踐中要學會善於發現、總結和運用規律，這樣才可以復習中事半功倍
6. 英語作文的寫作方法及技巧
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一般應做到
內容切題:不能走題、偏題
表達清楚:要讓別人知道你想說什麼，不要用你認為能看懂的漢語式英文句子
意義連貫:中英文化差異造成思維方式和文字表述方式的不同，英文表述更注重事實，所以寫英語作文不要過多的進行心理、環境描寫，120個字的作文結構要縝密，理由和例子要簡潔有力，說明問題，不要東拉西扯。
句法多變:為避免文章平淡、呆板，可使用不同的句式:強調句、倒裝句、否定句等等
語言正確:不要犯低級的語法錯誤
英語作文其實不難，如果你的英語底子不好，不太擅長使用比較復雜的語法，詞彙量也比較有限的話。建議用最簡單的句子表達意思，句式越簡單越好，能表達意思就好，一些生辟的單詞如果不會不需要直譯，可以用些片語。能表達意思就好，如果不會用用多了反而容易出錯，平時作業時可以慢慢積累，可以試著用些當作練習，考試時就不必了，原因就不多說了。我覺得要寫好英語作文還是平時多積累些，加上一些練習，比如平時可以多看些英語美文，如果有時間也可以刻意記些，時間長了語感自然就出來了，考試時有可能不知不覺的就閃出了平時的記憶。
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7. 英語作文寫作技巧
初中英語作文高分秘訣 1. 動筆之前，認真審題 《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題後，先不要急於動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活動時間、地點等。 2. 圍繞中心，擬定提綱 書面表達評分原則有四條： （1）內容要點； （2）運用詞彙和結構的數量； （3）運用語法結構和詞彙的准確性； （4）上下文的連貫性。 由此可見，要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，設想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結構分散，廢話連篇，嚴重跑題。書面表達，內容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文字數不要低於或超過規定的字數太多。 3. 語言通順，表達准確 (1) 避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。 (2) 多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。 (3)．注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。 1) 語態、時態要准確無誤。 2) 主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。 3) 注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 4) 注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。 5) 注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 標點符號特別注意漢英的不同，例如： 漢語 英語 A. 句號 。 . B. 省略號 …… … C. 頓號 、 無 (4) 描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如： 1) 外表特徵：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2) 服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3) 內心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4) 感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5) 動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5) 上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先後次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示並列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法： 1) 表示並列關系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or … 2) 表示轉折關系的過渡詞：but, yet, however … 3) 表示時間關系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that … 4) 表示空間關系的過渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside … 5) 表示比較關系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as … 6) 表示對照關系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though … 7) 表示遞進關系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again … 8) 表示因果關系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result… 9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually … 10) 表示強調的過渡詞：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important … 11) 表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, … 12) 表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as … 13) 表示總結性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking … 4. 不會表達，另闢蹊徑 中考作文給分是以要點和語言准確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單准確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：「錯誤面前人人平等，文採好不加分」。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可採用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。 (1) 迂迴而行 當漢語詞義不會用英語表達時，可以想一個與這個漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴展思路，然後從英語中找出一個與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。 (2) 小詞大用 漢語中有些語意看來很復雜很文雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。 (3) 借花獻佛 有時書面表達中需要的單詞或片語或許在試卷中的其他地方出現。因為剛剛做過題，記憶猶新，那麼就可信手拈來，為我所用。 5. 錦上添花，量力而行 如果你還有時間和精力，想把書面表達寫得更好，那麼，請注意以下幾點： (1) 句型多樣化，不要I（We）……到底，使人覺得乏味。 (2) 適當使用一些並列句或主從復合句。 (3) 進一步描繪人或事物時，適當使用定語從句。 (4) 適當使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞。 (5) 偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。 (6) 適當調換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。 (7) 上下句子緊接時，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節省篇幅。 6. 書寫工整，卷面整潔 字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認，要保持卷面的整潔。 7. 寫完之後，勿忘檢查 中考作文時，由於時間緊、內容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言准確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鍾時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手： (1) 格式是否有錯。 (2) 拼寫有無錯誤。 (3) 語言是否用錯。 (4) 時態、語態錯誤。 (5) 標點錯誤。 (6) 人稱是否用錯。 【注意】此時不宜在卷面上作較大的改動，以免顧此失彼，影響全局。 總之，只要平時同學們多練習寫作並有意運用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時間，在中考時一定能寫出高質量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。