高考英語寫作亮點詞彙

A. 求一些高中英語寫作句型，簡單點！

寫作常用句型總結
1.as an old saying goes,....正如一句古老的諺語所說
2....be nothing but... ....不過就是...
3.from where i stand.... 從我的立場來說
4.give oneself a chance to.....給某人一個機會去...
5.i feel sure that...我堅信...
6....is the best way to make sure that....確保...的最好辦法是...
7.we must do our absolute best to....我們必須竭盡全力做...
8.there is no denying the fect that...無可否認....
9.nothing is more+adj.+than to+v.沒有比...更重要的了
10.主語+cannot emphasize the importance of....too much 再怎麼強調..的重要性也不為過
11....pose a great threat to... ...對..造成了一大威脅（eg.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.)
12.stole the spotlight from...從...獲得大眾的矚目
13....touch sb. on the raw ....觸到某人的痛處
14.it is not uncommon that... 這是常有的事兒。。
15it is almost impossible to do.. 。。。是很困難的
16the recent research has shown that..最近研究表明。。
17...has/have no alternative but to...除...外別無選擇
18....between the devil and the deep blue sea 進退維谷，左右為難
19.content in the thought that...滿足於...的想法
20(重磅出擊，一般老師都會感動，這個句子可以千變萬化，可以替換其中的一些詞）The long,(costly strike) proved to be the last nail in the coffin for (the company),with( its history of financial problems).長時期的罷工損失巨大，再加上一直以來的財政問題，使得該公祠一蹶不振。 註：（...)都是可替換的

寫作亮點（因為我是英語科代表，同學們的考卷批完之後都由我統計，我翻閱了所有同學的作文，總結了一些寫作亮點）
1.分層次。Firstly, Secondly.....Finally
2.祈使句+and/or
3.if i were ...i would have done 虛擬語氣的運用
4.with復合結構的運用
5.the more...the more結構
6.should=ought to
7.in terms of mine以我來看
8.May you success!祝你成功。
9.My mother always tell me :Everything is possible if you put your heart into thing.
10.Faith will more mountains!
11.There is a will,there is a way.
暫時這么多，不求多，只求精，願你熟練運用，考取高分。

B. 高考英語寫作中的高級詞彙有哪些呢

①詞彙篇 單詞可以說一個人單詞量的展現，如果總停留在使用very good等小學詞彙，那老師把你當成發育不完全也正常.所以要使用一些高級詞彙（就象是給文章穿上了成人內衣），我不建議大家用考綱以外的詞彙（當然你能用更好），夏哥可以教你用高級替換簡單詞彙~~ severe 替換掉serious（嚴重的） a severe water shortage嚴重缺水 needy替換掉 ppor（ 貧窮的） wealthy 替換掉 rich （ 富裕的） benificial 替換掉 good （有益的） undesirable 替換掉 bad （不好的，不受歡迎的） nevertheless 替換掉 however（然而，不過） fundamental / significant 替換掉 important（ 重要的） relevant 替換掉 related （有關的） ....is highly relevant to....... extraodinary 替換掉 surprising （驚人的，非凡的） provided/providing （that）替換掉 if （如果.....） promote /strengthen 替換掉 improve （提高，加強） More should be done to strengthen instry's links with universities. 應該做更多的事情加強工業界和大學的聯系. cope with 替換掉 solve（ 解決） motivate 替換掉 encourage（ 激勵） We are looking for someone who will be able to motivate the staff to work hard.我們在尋找能激勵職員們努力工作的人. jeopardize 替換掉 be bad to （損害，危及） Failing exams could jeopardize her future. 考試不及格危及她的前程. ease 替換掉 relieve （減輕，緩解） To ease the problem of ..... 為了緩解....的問題.....
well-being 替換掉 happiness （幸福，安康） pros and cons 替換掉 advantages and disadvantages（好處和壞處） You must consider all the pros and cons of the matter before you make a decision.在你做決定之前，必須考慮這個問題的正反兩個方面. approach / method 替換掉 way（方法，方案） adopt 替換掉 use （採用，採取） the aged 替換掉 old people（老人） adolescents 替換掉 the young （青少年） employment 替換掉 job（就業） affair 替換掉 thing （事情，東西） bent 替換掉 gift （天賦，愛好） catastrophe 替換掉（ disaster 災難） subscribe to 替換掉 agree with（ 同意） tend 替換掉 want（趨向於..想要.....） I am tending to another customer at he moment. acquire 替換掉 gain （獲得（尤指知識上的）） administration 替換掉 government （政府部門） contribute to 替換掉 cause （引起） extremely 替換掉 very （非常的） frown on sth 替換 disagree with sth （ 不同意） for instance 替換掉 for example （例如） advocate 倡導 compensate for 彌補..... Spare no efforts for努力 In contemporary society 在當今社會 A vast amount of 大量的 be abundant in 富有... on ones own account 為了某人自己的利益
at ones own risk 自行負責 on account of 由於 On no account絕不要 arise from 由....引起 Are these any matters arising from the last meeting？ 這些事情都是由上次的會議引起的嗎？ assess 評估，評價 Examinations are not the only means of assessing ones ability. 考試不是評價一個人能力的唯一方法. authentic 真實的，可信的 graal 逐漸的 There has been a graal improvment in ...over the last two years. 過去的兩年中...逐漸改善. ....multiply rapidly ...迅速增加. ripe 時候成熟的 The country is ripe for change. 國家已是時候改變. trend 趨勢，趨向，潮流 The trend at the moment is that .... 現在..是一個趨勢..... emphrasize 強調，重視 I』d like to emphrasize how important it is to .... sustainable development 可持續發展
②句型篇 英語裡面常用的句型也就那麼幾個，盡量往裡套。能用到以下句型的千萬別用一般陳述句，能用長句千萬別用短句，最好一句話老長.每個句型我都弄個例句~~ 倒裝：
Not only di he speak correctly，but he spoke easily. Here comes a bus. Seldom have we felt as comfortable as here . 雙否： The postman never fails to come on time . 被動： Many things can be done to solve this problem . 非限定： The man is from the UK，which we can tell from his accent. 定從： This is the reason why he came late. This is the reason for which he came late. The school (that/which) he once studied in is very famous 讓步： Child as he is ，he can speak many foreaign languages. 獨立主格： （With）There being no bus, we had to go home on foot. The men moved slowly forward, neck deep in the water, with their officers guiding them.
③常用句子篇——起到一個首飾的作用，讓文章更銷魂~~~~ 這個有點頭疼，多背一背吧~~~ Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 在過去的5年中這里發生的一些變化. A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications． 在世界的溝通與交流方面產生了巨大的變化. This is a phenomenon that ..... 有一個...的現象........ It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
...從...增加到了........... People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth． 人們對..有不同的態度. When it comes to ..., some think ... 當談到...一些人認為.......... There is a public debate today that ... 當今有一個公共的爭論關於........... Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 最近這個問題得到了關注. Now there is a growing awareness that... 現在....的意識增強了. Many indivials, if not most, harbor the idea that…. 有許多人，不是特別多，懷有這樣的想法..... it is universally acknowledged that..... ....是一個社會的共識..... Just imagine what would be like if... 設想一下如果...... It is of great benefit to us. ...對我們是有很大的好處的. It has more disadvantages than advantages． 它有很多的優點和缺點. It plays an important role in our life． 它在我們的人生中扮演了很重要的角色. ... this story is not rare. 這樣的故事不少見. ..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life. 這樣的事情我們在生活中經常遇到. ..., the story still has a realistic significance.這個故事很有現實意義. But some others have just the opposite opinion. 一些人有相反的意見. But every coin has two sides. 每個硬幣都有兩面.（即每件事情都有兩
As for me, I'm in favour of the latter opinion.我支持後者. promote the public awareness of 增強了...的公共認識 The government should take effective measures and immediate actions. 政府應該採取及時有效的措施. To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see... 為了理解...的真相......，認識到....也是重要的. A study of ... will make this point clear .一項研究使這個觀點更清楚了. There is no point(use) in doing.....做...是沒有意義的. Distinguished scientific accomplishment is a matter of opportunity and of continuous and concentrated effort over long years. (很優美的句子,值得借鑒) from the …point of view 從…角度來看 最近, XXXXX現象引起了人們的廣泛關注 Recently, the phenomenon of (that) …… has aroused wide public concern 隨著社會(科技)的發展,人們開始注意到XXXX的重要性 Along with the advance of the society (science and technology), people are attaching much importance to …… Take ... for an example, it is a very obvious case . 拿..來說，這是個很明顯的案例. Some people argue that….., whereas others maintain that…. 一些人爭論.....另一些人支持....觀點. 就我個人而言(老實說), 我全力支持前者(後者) As for me, I am in high favor of the former (latter) Personally, I side with the former (latter) Frankly speaking/ To be frank/ To be honest/ Honestly speaking, it is the former (latter) that I approve of 我認為(在我看來,就我看來,我的觀點是, 我想….) I am convinced that…. As far as I am concerned, ….. To my point of view, ….. From where I stand, …… We should take some effective meas

C. 高考英語作文，用怎樣的單詞才算新穎用怎樣的結構才能出彩若用了一些高級詞彙，但不常用算不算亮點

主要是注意三點：
1. 不能有結構錯誤，結構錯誤在高考英語作文中是硬傷，出現過多的結構錯誤不可能拿高分。
2. 行文要流暢，語言要地道，讀起來要上口。
3.文章要有層性。

D. 求高考英語寫作常用的高級形容詞和副詞（一定要閱卷老師看得懂的）

advanced adj.高級的，先進的
determined adj.有決心的
concerned adj.擔心的
enthusiastic adj.熱情的，很感興趣的
aggressive adj.好鬥的，有進取心的
approximately adv.近似的，大約的
practical adj.實踐的，實用的
automatic adj.自動的
incredible adj.難以置信的
current adj.當前的，現在的
political adj.政治的
widespread adj.廣泛的
delighted adj.高興的
self-employed adj.自己經營的
visual adj.視力的，視覺的
contemporary adj.當代的
innocent adj.單純的
faithfully adv.忠誠地
environmental adj.自然環境的
naughty adj.淘氣的
curiously adv.好奇地
splendid adj.極好的，壯觀，
cautious adj.謹慎的
competitive adj.競爭的
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E. 高考英語作文中關於復雜句型和高級詞彙

1．表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this．
2）The reasons for this are as follows．
3）The reason for this is obvious．
4）The reason for this is not far to seek．
5）The reason for this is that．．．
6）We have good reason to believe that．．．
例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people』s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life．
註：如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握，可將其改寫成兩個句子。
如：Great changes have taken place in our life．
There are three reasons for this．這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
2．表示好處
1）It has the following advantages．
2）It does us a lot of good．
3）It benefits us quite a lot．
4）It is beneficial to us．
5）It is of great benefit to us．
例如：Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us．
3．表示壞處
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages．
2）It does us much harm．
3）It is harmful to us．
例如：However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television．
4．表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth．
2）We think it necessary to do sth．
3）It plays an important role in our life．
例如：Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， computers will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age．
5．表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures．
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties．
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth．
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with．
例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious．Thereforewe must take some effective measures to solve it．
6．表示變化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years．
2）A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications．
3）The computer has brought about many changes in ecation．
例如：Some changes have taken place in people』s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and morepeople are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins．
7．表示事實、現狀
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．
2）No one can deny the fact that．．．
3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．
5）However，that』s not the case．
例如：We cannot ignore the fact that instrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems，we can start by ecating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment．
8．表示比較
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．
3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people』s health by giving them e physical exercise．
9．表示數量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．
例如：With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people』s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on ecation has increased．
再如：From the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000．
10．表示看法
1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth．
2）People have different opinions on this problem．
3）People take different views of（on）the question．
4）Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．．
例如：People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers．
再如：Do 「lucky numbers really bring good luck？Different people have different views on it．
註：一個段落有時很適宜以問句開始，考生應掌握這一寫作方法。
11．表示結論
1）In short，it can be said that ．．．
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows．
3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ．．．
例如：From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that
examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved．
註：例句1可用於任何一個段落的結論句；例句3則多用文章結論段的第一句。
12．套語
1）It』s well known to us that ．．．
2）As is known to us，．．．
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about．
4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that ．．．
5）As a proverb says，「Where there is a will，there is a way．
例如：As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus． The reason for this is obvious．Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an 「ivory tower

F. 怎麼寫出英語作文得分的「亮點」

字跡，短語，詞彙，從句，句式。
短語詞彙背點逼格高的，虛擬語氣最好用用一句，定語從句基本每句話都可以用適當用兩句就行了，句式去網上扒然後背，最後就是字跡流暢，整體美觀。

G. 高考英語寫作，如何提升文章亮點

要想把一篇文章寫好，不僅要注意行文通順與連貫、過渡與銜接等，還要對文章進行潤色，嘗試使用高級詞彙和復雜句式，以增加文章的亮點，給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。

一、巧設開頭和結尾

1．開頭

常見的開頭方式有開門見山式、描述主題式、提供背景知識式、小故事引導式、提出問題式、設置懸念式、倒敘式和名言引入式等。雖然開頭有著各式各樣的風格，不能千篇一律，要因不同文章的需要而各異，但又有其共同遵循的原則：

開頭多是通篇文章內容的摘要

開頭常能展示文章的主題

開頭應能抓住讀者的注意力，引導讀者讀下去。

用於文章開頭的句型有：

(1)There is a general discussion today about the issue of...；Those who object to...argue that...；They believe that...；But people who favor...，on the other hand，argue that...

(2)Faced with...，quite a few people argue that...；But other people conceive differently.

(3)Currently there is a widespread concern that...

(4)Now people in growing number are coming to realize that...

(5)Now it is commonly held that...；But I doubt whether...

(6)Recently the issue of...has been brought to public attention.

(7)Sb.argues/maintains/holds/insists/believes that...Now more and more people share this belief.

(8)More and more people are realizing/have come to realize...

(9)There is no denying/doubt that...

2．結尾

結尾的方法有很多，如總結式、重復式、結論式、暗示式和求解式等。

結尾一般是文章的升華或對文章主題的歸納，也是寫好文章的關鍵。好的結尾能喚起讀者共鳴，深化主題，給人回味，引人深思。

用於文章結尾的句型有：

(1)From what has been discussed above/taking into account all these factors, we may safely arrive at/draw/come to/reach the conclusion that...

(2) It is high time that we put considerable/great/special emphasis on...

(3) We must look for all immediate method, because the present situation of... if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/result in...

(4) Many solutions/methods are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

(5) There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful/beneficial.

(6) No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of...，but the general awareness of the necessity/importance of... might be the first step on the right way.

(7) There is little doubt/denying that...

(8)It is, therefore, obvious/evident that the task of... require immediate attention.

(9) As far as...be concerned, I believe/think that...

(10) In conclusion，...

(11) In my opinion, I am in favor of...

(12) Personally，I prefer to...

(13) In short，...should learn to...；Only in this way can the most difficult problems be solved properly.

(14) As far as I am concerned，I agree with the opinion that...

二、准確地道的英美式表達

1．注意區分同義詞、近義詞的細微差異

a little boy小男孩(有可愛之意)

a small boy小男孩(強調身材瘦小)

2．恰當使用限定詞

用詞准確，從另一個角度來講就是要使論述客觀、適度，這就需要考生適當使用一些限定詞，以避免觀點的絕對化，從而提高說服力和可信度。

He is the top student in our class.

He is one of the top students in our class.

3．注意詞語的習慣搭配

用詞准確不僅要求考生掌握具體單詞的含義，還要熟悉詞語的習慣搭配，一定要避免受漢語影響而出現錯誤。

Nobody is to be blamed for it.(F)

Nobody is to blame for it.(T)

4．避免口語化

高考作文一般應該使用較正式的書面文體，因此在寫作時要避免使用口語化的詞彙。

This is the best hotel you can find here.

You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.

5．避免贅言啰嗦

贅句是指用詞不簡練。表達某一思想，本來只需要一兩個詞，卻用了冗長的片語或者從句，如repeat again，return back，still remain，very perfect等。

三、提升表達結構

1．變簡單句為並列句或復合句

Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.

It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.

2．借用關鍵詞彙(介詞，不定式等)壓縮句子長度，提升句子品味

The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.

The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.

3．語態互換

Someone saw him studying hard in his study.

He was seen studying hard in his study.

4．語序調整

The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.

Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.

5．強調句式

You must write to me when you get there.

Do remember to write to me when you get there.

6．感嘆及省略

Time flies like an arrow.

How time flies!

Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.

Look out for cars when crossing the street.

7．語氣虛擬

You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.

If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.

8．非謂語動詞的使用

They sang and laughed as they went back to school.

Singing and laughing，they went back to school.

9．插入語

I think the book is well worth reading.

The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.

10．格言警句的套用

(1)Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。

(2)Every coin has two sides.凡事皆有好壞。

(3)No pains，no gains.不勞無獲。

(4)It's never too late to learn.活到老學到老。

(5)Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。

(6)One is never too old to learn.學無止境。

(7)Actions speak louder than words.事實勝於雄辯。

(8)Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。

11．句式調換

He came here at 5 pm yesterday.

He didn't come here until 5 pm yesterday.

Not until/till 5 pm did he come here yesterday.

H. 怎樣使英語作文有亮點

要想獲得高分就應在「正確」表達的基礎上寫出自己的特色，寫出自己的「亮」點。

一、詞彙選擇——標新立異

在寫作中「較高級詞彙」的使用主要是指使用《大綱》上沒有的詞語、使用通過構詞法變化來的新詞、使用同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。

1)這棟房子在芳草街的一棟樓上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常見詞語，而situates in則是《大綱》上沒有的，屬於高級詞彙。

2)在周末我們做很多作業。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表達時沒有使用過於直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大綱》詞彙end加後綴-less變化來的。

3)洗澡間和廚房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表達要點時，B句使用了well furnished,這比good語氣強，也顯得生動。

在造句時,「較高級詞彙」如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結構造句——與眾不同

在造句時,既要使句子生動，又要使其簡明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發生過一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數同學使用了there be結構，這是對的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見句式。另闢蹊徑而使用了「主語+謂語+賓語」結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞彙，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡潔)

2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(強調句式)

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長勢喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)

3、句式多樣,復雜得體。在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結合，簡單句、並列句與復合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較復雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。下面的表達中A句簡單句多，而且多處使用 there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(請同學們自己分析)。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房裡面有卧室、有洗澡間、有廚房；卧室里有床、沙發、桌子和椅子等。

A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇——獨具匠心

在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點，同時為使主題突出,結構嚴謹，我們應注意學習和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002範文堪稱典範。請看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)該文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，開門見山，隨後兩個段落均使用了主題句(見黑體字部分)，使全文結構緊湊，表達嚴謹。

2)在表述要點時範文還對要點出場順序作了調整，如「40%的同學認為應收門票，但不宜過高。」前部分作為主題句放在句首，而後部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.這樣就分清了輕重緩急，主題突出，條理清楚。

3)範文使用了and, what is more, however等連詞，在段落之間使用了on the other hand(說明前後兩個觀點是相悖的)，這些連接手段的運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯系，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。

4)範文在第二段為說明不收門票的「原因」時增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等細節，這也是解決句與句之間缺少連貫性的常見方法。

總之，要想使自己的文章有亮點，吸引讀者，在考試中獲得高分，就應在用詞、造句、謀篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一處特長都是「亮」點，都是值得肯定的。

I. 求高考英語寫作加分詞彙

我沒有在網上下載到這方面的資料，我覺得網上的資料用的人多了，就淪為平庸了，這樣也不好，寫作是本人的老本行，高中一般都是21-23這個級別，大學英語作文被老師在班上推介為範文！！
對於作文，我說的最多的就是：不走尋常路！你不要以為在網上下載那些所謂的優秀作文，拿來背背，你就成為高手了，其實大錯特錯！因為我看了之後也覺得一般，甚至有些拙劣，嘩眾取寵的味道，比如有的所謂優秀作文竟然還用什麼be good at ，importance，very much，depend on，in my opinion ，completely 這樣低等的寫作詞彙，說它低等，那是因為這些詞彙已經廣為人知，閱卷老師已經看的麻木不仁了！
要寫出高人一等的作文，我覺得並不難，只要你有一定的語法基礎和一定量的寫作詞彙（越高級越好），寫作句型，就足可以應對常規的高考，四六級考試……（我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個級別，四六級的作文都是110多分）
首先是語法，在你的語法達到一定層次之後，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番！
其次，是詞彙，我覺得，在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞彙取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什麼變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙！給你打個比方吧，很多想到「許多」就用many，但是你別忘了many a ；handsome；massive，innumerable，a multitude of ；很多人想到「專家」就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到「擅長」這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上！
再次，是怎麼將文章潤色，從而使你的文章大放異彩！！關於這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」，包括如下幾個方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處，那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿，比如：
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver』s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part，the driver『s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最後，我建議你，平時讀報，或者做題的時候，發現有好的句子好的詞彙，你要抄下來，長期下來，你的作文會有提高的，需要說明的是，這個提高過程可能很緩慢，但是最後能收到很好的效果，以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個級別，靠的就是對語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級的詞彙，句型，句子。