『壹』 英文記敘文開頭應該怎麼寫
如何進行英語記敘文寫作訓練
下面從三個方面來分析記敘文的寫作訓練:
(—)敘述的人稱:
(1)第一人稱敘述(First—person narrator):寫作者以當事人的口氣,即第一人稱來敘述,把文章中的事情以「我」的所見所聞來告訴讀者,用主觀的表現手法,給讀者一種親切自然的感覺,如同親身經歷一樣,加強了事件的可信性,直接抒發作者的思想情感,從而引起讀者的共鳴。
(2)第三人稱敘述(Third—person narrator):寫作者從旁觀者的角度來敘述事件,以客觀的寫作方法,能夠充分反映事件中各人的感受及見解,以全知的視角來敘述。
(二)敘述的內容:
一篇記敘文應注意交代清楚事情的始末及細節,即何時、何地、何事、何人及何因(when,where,what,who and why/how),做到有條有理,使讀者易於明白。
1.事件:為了引起讀者的注意,可以從一些糾紛或交叉事件中展開,直到高潮出現,再將問題解決。
2.人物:集中主要人物的描寫,記敘人物遇到的事情及人物有什麼影響。
3.時態:一般多採用一般過去時。
(三)敘述的方法:
一般敘述的線索可分為以下幾種:
(1)以時間為線索,按時間的順序來展開。
(2)以地點為線索,以地點的轉移為順序來展開。
(3)以事件發展的過程為線索,或以人物出現的先後次序來展開。
(4)以事物的象徵意義為線索來展開。
(5)以人物的思想行為及認知的過程為線索來展開。
總之,英文寫作是一個學生綜合能力的書面體現,是一個長期復雜的訓練過程。因此,培養學生的寫作能力不是一蹴而就的,而要在平時就從學生的實際水平出發,有目的、有計劃、有要求、有檢查、有反饋地進行,由易至難,循序漸進。只有這樣,學生到高時考才能做到厚積薄發,思如泉湧、下筆如有神。
練習:
1.請將下面對話改寫成一篇記敘文。
「Do you believe in life after death?」Jack『s boss asked Jack.
「Yes,sir.」
「Well,then,that makes everything just fine,」the boss went on.「About an hour after you left yesterday to go to your grandpa『s funeral,he dropped into see you.」
文中應該說明:(1)Jack向老闆請假一天的理由是什麼? (2)Jack回來後,老闆向他提出什麼問題?(3)老闆舉出什麼事實?(4)當時Jack的表情如何?詞數大約100.
2.請根據下面的提示寫一篇詞數為120左右的記敘文:(1)昨天你第一次跟著媽媽去你家附近新開設的市場,你媽媽經常去那裡買東西。(2)市場里人很多,各類商品隨處可見,叫賣聲此起彼伏,人們在談論著商品和價格。(3)你曾要媽媽買點鮮魚。雖然到處都在賣凍魚,但你們沒費什麼勁也買到了鮮魚。(4)媽媽還買了一些別的東西。(5)市場上的一切給你留下了深刻的印象。
『貳』 英語寫作手法
英文與中文的寫作手潔及修辭手法是大體相似,下面是英文常見修辭手法:
01
Simile
明喻:標志詞常用:like, as, seem, as if, as though, similar to, such as 等。
例如: I wandered lonely as a stay dog.
我像一隻流浪狗一樣孤獨地四處漂泊。
02
metaphor
隱喻,暗喻
例如:
Hope is a good breakfast, but it is a bad supper.
希望是頓美好的早餐,但卻是一頓糟糕的晚餐。
03
metonymy
借喻,轉喻
I had the muscle, and they made money out of it.
我有力氣,他們就用我的力氣賺錢。
04
synecdoche
提喻
例如:
1. There are about 100 hands working in his factory.他的廠里約有100名工人。
05
synesthesia
通感、聯覺、移覺
例如:
1. The birds sat upon a tree and poured forth their lily like voice.
鳥兒落在樹上,傾瀉出百合花似的聲音。
06
personification
擬人
擬人是把生命賦予無生命的事物。
例如:
The night gently lays her hand at our fevered heads.
夜晚溫柔地平復著我們狂熱的頭腦
07
hyperbole
誇張
例如:
1. I beg a thousand pardons.
我千百次地祈求寬恕
08
rhetorical repetition
疊言
例如:
It must be created by the blood and the work of all of us who believe in the future, who believe in man and his glorious man—made destiny.
它必須用我們這些對於未來,對於人類以及人類自己創造的偉大命運具有信心的人的鮮血和汗水去創造
『叄』 英語作文的寫作方法網上講得太復雜,講點簡單的......是初中級
我覺得初級的話還是模仿比較有效,針對不同的題材在網上下載不同的模板和範文,先背誦,在模仿寫作,比較有效。我記得我們考4級前一個月都會背模擬題的範文,挺有效果的,個人經驗,僅供參考。
『肆』 英語作文開頭怎麼寫
一、說明原因型模塊
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注釋:
1、XX的第一個優點
2、支持XX的做法
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二個優點
5、舉例證明優點二
6、說明XX優點三的影響
二、說明原因型模塊
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
三、說明原因型模塊
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7).
注釋:
1、人們針對XX的態度和舉措
2、歸納現狀
3、第一個原因
4、第二個原因
5、第三個原因
6、重申造成現狀的最重要原因
四、說明原因型模塊
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since
(5),it is natural that (6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
注釋:
1、提出論題
2、說明現狀
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的後果
7、解決方法
提綱式作文寫作模板
1、對立觀點式
A. 有人認為X 是好事,贊成X,為什麼?
B. 有人認為X 是壞事,反對X,為什麼?
C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。
2、批駁觀點式
A.一個錯誤觀點。
B.我不同意。Many people argue that 錯誤觀點。By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。 There might be some element of truth in these people's belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3、社會問題(現象)式
A.一個社會問題或者現象
B.產生的原因
C.對社會和我們生活的影響
D.如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)
E.前景的預測。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辯論式議論文模版(一)
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that
觀點1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that
觀點2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,
論據1. More importantly,
論據2. Most important of all,
論據3. In summary, 總結觀點。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。
辯論式議論文模版(二)
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that
觀點1. While others point out that
觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing,
論據1. For another,
論據2. Last but not the least,
論據3. To conclude, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。
辯論式議論文模版(三)
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that
觀點1. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all,
論據1. Furthermore,
論據2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,
論據3. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或 From above, we can predict that 預測。
『伍』 英語寫作常見開頭有哪些
1、開門見山,揭示主題文章一開頭就交待清楚文章的主題是什麼。如「 I Spent My Vacation」(我怎樣度假)的開頭是:
I Spent my last vacation happily.
下面是題為「Honesty」(談誠實)一文中的開頭:
Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.
2、交代人物、事情、時間或環境開頭在文章的開頭,先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如「A Trip to Jinshan」 (去金山旅遊)的開頭:
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3、 回憶性的開頭
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如「A Trip to the Taishan Mountain」(泰山游)的開頭是:
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的開頭即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如「The Happiness of Reading Books」(讀書的快樂)的開頭:
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介紹環境式的開頭即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如「An Accident」(一場事故)的開頭是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6、交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的,如通過文章要表揚誰,批評誰,或說明一個什麼問題等。如「Pollution Control」(控制污染)的開頭:
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
『陸』 英語的寫作方法
開始抄的話可以多背背範文,照著模板寫。然後漸漸熟了就記一些有用的新穎的亮眼的片語和句子,常常使用常常新。平常多寫,拿給同學或者老師看,多練比光背有用多。
英語作文其實不糾結,就跟我們寫中文作文一樣,都是零起步多練習就可以了。
『柒』 英語作文怎樣寫開頭和結尾
一. 英語作文開頭方式
1、「開門見山」式
一般來說,文章的開頭應盡量做到「開門見山」,即要用簡單明了的語言引出文章的話題,使人一開始就能了解文章要說明的內容。
① 對於敘事類的文章,可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。如「A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)」的開頭可以是:Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對於論述性的文章,可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點,接著展開進一步的論述。如「The Time and the Money (時間和金錢)」 的開頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back, but……
2、回憶性開頭
二. 英語作文結尾方式
1、自然結尾,點明主題
隨著文章的結束,文章自然而然地結尾。如「Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)」的結尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如「The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)」 的結尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
『捌』 英語作文寫作方法
您好!
一般應做到
內容切題:不能走題、偏題
表達清楚:要讓別人知道你想說什麼,不要用你認為能看懂的漢語式英文句子
意義連貫:中英文化差異造成思維方式和文字表述方式的不同,英文表述更注重事實,所以寫英語作文不要過多的進行心理、環境描寫,120個字的作文結構要縝密,理由和例子要簡潔有力,說明問題,不要東拉西扯。
句法多變:為避免文章平淡、呆板,可使用不同的句式:強調句、倒裝句、否定句等等
語言正確:不要犯低級的語法錯誤
英語作文其實不難,如果你的英語底子不好,不太擅長使用比較復雜的語法,詞彙量也比較有限的話。建議用最簡單的句子表達意思,句式越簡單越好,能表達意思就好,一些生辟的單詞如果不會不需要直譯,可以用些片語。能表達意思就好,如果不會用用多了反而容易出錯,平時作業時可以慢慢積累,可以試著用些當作練習,考試時就不必了,原因就不多說了。我覺得要寫好英語作文還是平時多積累些,加上一些練習,比如平時可以多看些英語美文,如果有時間也可以刻意記些,時間長了語感自然就出來了,考試時有可能不知不覺的就閃出了平時的記憶。
多用連接詞!
遞進型:besides ;what's more ;let alone解釋型:that is (to say);in other words轉折型:however;but;yet;otherwise列舉型:for example;such as ;on the other hand因果型:since;therefore;as a result並列型:and;or;also;as well as總結型:in a word ;in short; on the whole;in conclusion見解型:in my opinion;speaking;as far as I am concerned
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