㈠ 怎麼寫英語作文啊。
高中英語作文(書面表達)是英語綜合能力的集中體現,是詞彙語法閱讀遣詞造句篇章結構邏輯思維等的綜合考查.一般有經驗的老師只要看一下一個人寫幾句英語,就能大致判斷其英語水平.要想 真正提高英語書面表達能力,非在詞彙慣用法搭配和基本語法上下苦功夫.同時通過閱讀來積累素材.從漢語作文就可知英語作文有多難.也可得到啟示該怎麼訓練.小學到初中在到高中10 多年,有多少學生能夠寫出象樣的漢語作文?
英語作文怎麼寫?好在知要求根據某個 情景話題寫10 多句話,120詞左右,同常要看懂提示,認真審題,1).審文體,要求 寫成什麼文體?如何開頭結尾?是書信?是看圖作文?還是根據圖表寫議論文?各種文體 有大致固定的結構.
2))審要點,特別是動詞用哪個?評分 時,是按要點是否全部涉及,表達是否清楚來定 檔次的.
要點確定後,重要的是用好 動詞,可以在原文旁邊或圖上標出擬用的動詞,最好一步到位,將時態 也帶進去,確定全文基本時態 是現在時 還是過去時?直接將該詞的形式表出來,省略打 草稿的步驟;
3),將要點擴充成句子,注意前後問的連貫和一致.
4),加 必要的連詞,是全文連貫和文理通順,有的句子前後再 調整合並,寫成從句或使用非謂語等其他手段.
5).通讀全文,檢查是否有錯.改正拼寫和標點錯誤.寫作文 是一個復雜 的思維過程.一篇 號作文需 反復修改,和進行周密的思維活動,沒有必要的詞彙,素材積累是無從下手的,多讀範文,多練習,才有望 提高,正如游泳騎車等技能只有通過不斷練習游 和騎 ,而不是純理論能奏效的.
㈡ 英語作文怎麼寫啊
1. The importance of water
It』 our ty to save water. As we know , water is very important to man, we can』t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don』t care about it .They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.
They throw rubbish into rivers , too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily.
If we don』t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.
2.Saving Our City
It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly. Or it may cause a lot of problems. It may pollute the air and water. People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.
Our city has started to face the problem. Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place .Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air. Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers. People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere. We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.
3.(How to Protect the Environment)
Good environment can make people feel happy and fit . To improve the environment means to improve our life. We should plant more trees and flowers around us . We shouldn』t cut them down . We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into st bins. Never spit in public. Don』t draw on public walls. It』s our ty to protect the environment.
4. water
Our environment is very important for our lives . We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water pollution are very serious . The environment around us becomes very terrible . We should protect our environment. First, we should plant many trees to keep water. Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.. Third , we shouldn』t throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn』t use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us.
5. Health is far more important than wealth. Good health enables us to enjoy our life and achieve what we hope for in our career. On the contrary, poor health leads to nothing. How can we keep healthy Here is some advice. Firstly, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. So we should avoid food with lots of sugar and fat/which is rich in sugar and fat. Secondly, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Besides, we have to avoid too much work pressure. Finally, we have to get rid of those bad habits that damage our health, such as drinking and smoking. In conclusion, if we stick to the advice given above, we will lead a healthy life.
(How to Keep Healthy)
As we know, keeping healthy is important to us. But what should we do to keep healthy? First,we should get up early. we should eat healthy food, drink a lot of water and do more exercise . Food can give us energy. Doing exercise can make us strong. Second,we should change clothes often, wash hands often, keep the air fresh and clean and do house cleaning often to stop germs from getting into our bodies. You shouldn』t keep long fingernails. At last, we should go to see a doctor at once if we don』t feel well.
My school life
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.
Great changes in China)
Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages. The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasses have been built in big cities. Chinese people』s life is much better than ever before. We have TV sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc. We』ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.
(My School Life)
My school life is very interesting. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After washing face, I read English about half an hour. I think it』s a good habit. I always go to school by bike,eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. The classes always end at about 5 o』clock. After school, we often play basketball or do some sports on the playground happily.I go home at about five forty. After supper, I watch TV for a while, Then I finish my homework . I go to bed at about 9: 30.
My school life
I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. After class, my classmates and I often take part in different school activities. I』m interested in computer science and I often go to our school computer group. I learn to get useful things from the Internet. I think it is important to learn to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. I want to work for our country with computers when I grow up.
(Dreams)
Everyone has his dream. As a middle school student, I also have my dream. I wish to be an astronaut like Yang Liwei when I grow up. Now I am working hard at my lessons, and have sports every day to keep healthy. I often take classes about space and try to learn things about space on the Internet. I am sure my dream will come true.
Our monitor
Li Min is our monitor. She is tall, healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing. Li Min works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language. But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains.With great efforts she made much progress in English study. Li Min is modest and always ready to help others. She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She sets us all a fine example.
(MY NATIVE TOWN)
My native town is X. We have settled down here since my grandfather was a child. In other words, my family has lived here for more than one hundred years. It is a small village. there are about one thousand inhabitants. Most of them are farmers. The mode of their living is very simple. However, they have already possessed television sets and refrigerators. They made up their minds to live a modern life.
Sport
1}As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.Let』s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and rece diseases.
2}Doing sport builds up our body strength and reces diseases.Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY,KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let』s keep on doing it.
I love you, china
Since the day I was born, I began to have a proud name—Chinese. Since the day I began to talk, the most beautiful sentence I』ve ever learnt has been 「I love you, China!」I love you, China, and I』m so proud of being a Chinese. I』m proud that I』ve got the beautiful yellow skin, black eyes and black hair. I』m also proud that I speak the most beautiful language in the world—Chinese.I love you, China, for I can feel the deep love you give me every day, every minute. Last year, I got an opportunity to visit the United States of America. During my staying there, my father』s boss once invited my family to dinner. While at , he looked at me and asked: 「Little boy, how long have you been in America?」 「About a month,」 I answered, 「How lucky you are!」 he said, 「If you were living in China, how could you learn such perfect English?」 I smiled and told him proudly that all the students in China are able to learn English at school. I saw his surprised eyes and said to myself, 「I』m proud of you, China 」
The summer holiday
This year's summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside, where I saw mountains and fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village, the water in which was quite clear.
I kept a diary every day. Besides doing farm work, I help the children in the neighborhood with their lessons. All of them showed much interest in English. They could read and write well, but they could hardly understand simple English. So every day in the morning I spent about two hours helping them improve their listening and spoken English. They all made great progress. Their parents all thought highly of me. I now realize that knowledge is very much needed in the countryside.
My dream
What do I want to do when I』m older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.
I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.
I play the piano when I』m ten years old. Now I』m in grand five. I hope when I』m sixteen years old , I can become grand eight. I』ll be harder and harder to practise.
Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.
Learning English is like building a house
Learning English is like building a house. Laying a strong foundation(n.地基 ) is the first and most important step. In other words, you should read and speak English every day. Memorizing new words and phrases in also helpful. Like building a house, learning English takes some time. So don』t be impatient(不耐煩的). Remember, 「Rome wasn』t built in a day」.
The person who I worship)
I worship my dad most. Not only is he a highly ecated and successful businessman, he is also a caring family man.
My dad was born and grew up in China. He is a highly ecated professional who received his master's degree from University of Cambridge in Uk. My dad is a very successful financial expert in China. Being a caring family man, my dad loves me and my mom; he shows great respect toward his parents.
Last and certainly not least, I worship my parents and love everybody in my family!
helping each other)
We are living in a society where people help each other in many ways. Not only does helping good for people, it is also good for our society.
Helping each other does good for people in different ways. Nobody can survive or live a better life without having other people's help in our society. On the other hand, helping each other can help the progress of our society. Human labour is a good example.
Last but not least, helping each other does good for people and the society where they are living in!
I love parents
Who gives me birth? Who brings me up? Who dedicates his/her whole life to me? My parents. Who gives me food? Who gives me clothes? Who gives me care? My parents.
My parents, they don』t want to get any reward from me. Not only my parents, all the parents in the world don』t charge anything from their children. They give us everything they can. They spend their whole life loving me, so I love my parents, too. Since I was given birth, I』ve started to love them even if I didn』t realize it. It will be the time for my birthday soon. I want to say to my parents: I love you.
environmental matter)
The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays. Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.
Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world. We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.
In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world!
周記的話,作文應該也可以,上面都是在較為隱蔽的網站找的,不會被發現。
供參考,求採納
另外,抄作業不素好孩子哦~~~
㈢ 應該如何寫英語作文呢
寫作是本人的老本行,高中一般都是21-23這個級別,大學英語作文被老師在班上推介為範文!!
對於作文,我說的最多的就是:不走尋常路!你不要以為在網上下載那些所謂的優秀作文,拿來背背,你就成為高手了,其實大錯特錯!因為我看了之後也覺得一般,甚至有些拙劣,嘩眾取寵的味道,比如有的所謂優秀作文竟然還用什麼be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 這樣低等的寫作詞彙,說它低等,那是因為這些詞彙已經廣為人知,閱卷老師已經看的麻木不仁了!
要寫出高人一等的作文,我覺得並不難,只要你有一定的語法基礎和一定量的寫作詞彙(越高級越好),寫作句型,就足可以應對常規的高考,四六級考試……(我記得高中25分滿分的作文我可以保持在21-23這個級別,四六級的作文都是110多分)
首先是語法,在你的語法達到一定層次之後,你就可以追求更多的變化了,比如,用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等,這樣可以增加你的語法亮點,讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮,在你的試卷上多掃射一番!
其次,是詞彙,我覺得,在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上,作文便應該以詞彙取勝,因為在這個層次上,大家的語法都差不多,沒什麼變化,唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙!給你打個比方吧,很多想到「許多」就用many,但是你別忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到「專家」就寫expert,但很少人會想到specialist,很多人在想到「擅長」這詞,就寫be good at ,卻不知還有更高級的表達法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就體現在這些細微的差別上!
再次,是怎麼將文章潤色,從而使你的文章大放異彩!!關於這方面,我覺得我自己使用最多的,也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」,包括如下幾個方面:盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞,在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞,在過去分詞前加入副詞,在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……,總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處,那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿,比如:
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver』s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver『s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
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最後,我建議你,平時讀報,或者做題的時候,發現有好的句子好的詞彙,你要抄下來,長期下來,你的作文會有提高的,需要說明的是,這個提高過程可能很緩慢,但是最後能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保證在21-23這個級別,靠的就是對語法的熟練掌握和積累了許多較高級的詞彙,句型,句子。
㈣ 英語怎麼寫作文
一、掌握相對足夠的詞彙量是進行英語寫作的前提。英語是由一個一個的單詞構成的,由單詞構成短語,又由單詞、短語構成句子,一些句子按照一定的邏輯關系組合一起構成文章。單詞是構成英語句子的基本單位,沒有足夠的詞彙,我們就無法造句,更不可能進行寫作。
那麼,單詞的學習又從哪些方面做呢?1.單詞的發音,讀音是學習單詞的第一步,要學會讀,才可能進行其後面的學習活動。學習發音時,要看看教師的口形,認清是母音,還是輔音,是清音還是濁音。當然,學會音標就重要了。2.單詞的拼寫。一個單詞,由哪些字母構成,其先後順序是什麼,都必須記住,這就是我們常說的背單詞了,主要就是背拼寫,難背。其實單詞的拼寫記憶是有規律的,有一些方法的。3.單詞的詞義。英語單詞的詞義有的有一個,有的有多個,這也是英語學習的難點之一。只有掌握詞義,我們才能正常使用。4.單詞的詞性,要弄清是名詞,動詞,形容詞,還是副詞,連詞等。弄清了詞性,你才會用形容詞作謂語,不會用動詞作定語,才能寫出正確的英語句子。5.單詞的搭配。單個的單詞,沒有多少意義,單詞與單詞的結合,才能表達豐富的內容和思想。所以學習單詞,要學會將一個單詞與其它單片語合形成多種意思,如,book詞,表示書,a book,read a book 等才有意義。我們將單詞和單片語合,能得出大量的短語和句子。單詞的學習是一天天積累來的。
二、掌握基本的語法知識。語法是構成語言的規則,相當於建造房屋的鋼筋和水泥,能把單詞和短語按照一定的規律結合形成句子。英語的語法比較復雜,詞性、詞形的變化,時態,語態,種子類型等都是語法,特別是英語的五種基本句型結構一定要熟練掌握。語法是學習英語中最難最枯燥的地方。其實,學習語法要多思考,多比較和總結,適當與漢語比較,找出相同與不同之處。語法的學習也是日積月累的,每天學一點,積沙成塔。只有掌握必要的語法知識 ,才能寫出正確的英語句子。
三、掌握課本句子能幫助你寫出更多的英語句子。我們的英語課本,其中的句子是標準的英語句子,是經過專家和外國人士檢驗的,具有很強的示範作用,我們同學應該牢固掌握並多模仿,多分析其中的規律,這樣才能寫出相似的句子。
四、背誦優秀的句子和範文。一些優秀和英語句子,不僅內容好,而且讀起來有美的享受,這樣的句子要積累,要背誦,在作文時有意識地引用,能讓我們的英語文章增色,從而增加得分的可能。同時,一些優美
㈤ 英語怎麼寫作文
寫作在英語學習中是培養和提高語言能力的有效手段,它有助於鞏固和掌握所學詞彙、語法等語言知識,有助於訓練直接用所學語言進行思維,有利於提高駕馭語言的能力.中學生該如何寫好英語作文呢?經過多年的教學實踐,在英語寫作方面我總結如下幾點淺見:
一、增加詞彙
英語寫作要求有一定量的詞彙,沒有詞彙就好比巧婦無米難以下廚.寫作時可能出現要寫的詞記不起來、要用的詞拿不準、尤其是遇到同義詞、更不知用哪一個好、或詞性沒記住,結果亂用……. 這都說明平時對單詞的記憶不夠牢固,理解不清.這就要求我們在記單詞的時候多花點力氣,要從單詞的音、形、義入手,最好不要單獨記憶單詞,這樣容易遺忘,要把它放在句子或文章中一起記憶,這樣可把握單詞的詞義、用法、搭配等詞彙特點.除了課本上的詞彙必須掌握外,還要進行廣泛的課外閱讀,來增加詞彙.
二、掌握語法
英語中雖有很多句子與漢語相似或相同,但語法與漢語不盡相同,它有自己的基本句型固定搭配、固定短語等.要想寫好作文,必須學好語法.英語中有五種基本句型結構,幾乎所有的英語句型都是五種句型的擴大、延伸或變化,因此,應牢記這五種基本句型,並不斷地練習運用.
1. S +V
2. S+V+O
3. S+V+O+O
4. S+V+P
5. S+V+O+C
這五種句型雖能表達一定的意思,但無法比較自由地表達思想,因此還需對學生進一步進行擴句訓練,在課堂上充分發揮學生的想像力,進行擴句練習.其次,要加強句型教學,要對一些句子進行分析,增強他們利用各種句子進行一意多種表達的訓練.再次,充分利用新教材中「鞏固語言練習」對學生進行基本語感的訓練.
三、背誦範文
古人說:「熟讀唐詩三百首,不會做詩也會吟」.背誦範文是中國人學習語言的傳統方法,它不但可以加強記憶、積累語言材料,而且可以定型語式句式,語套模式和行文模式,將背誦用於英語學習更是見效.因為一種語言的具體句子和語篇是無限的,而其結構模式則是有限的.掌握一個結構模式或行文模式就意味著具有生成無數語氣和語篇的能力.語言模式的作用類似於數學公式,非常重要.而經典的語言模式則存在於範文之中,所以要熟讀背誦.
四、以說促寫
說話是作文的先導,是作文的起步.俗話說:「只有出口成章,才能下筆成文」.在教學過程中,教師可有意識地讓學生用詞造句,由詞生文練習.由易到難,循序漸進地讓學生說.
可以把現實生活搬進課堂,模擬生活中的各種人物、情景,讓學生在真情實感的角色扮演中
進行口語交際.讓學生把生活中的人物通過語言、動作、心理活動表演出來,讓學生自由發揮,暢所欲言.也可以通過演講培養口頭作文能力,並引導學生把「說」和「寫」聯系起來,這樣說說寫寫,寫寫說說,不僅提高了口語表達能力,而且通過說話過程中對口頭語言的敘述,提高了書面語言表達能力,使學生寫作能做到中心明確,條理清楚.
五、勤於動筆
適當地進行寫作練習是不可缺少的,如果光大談寫作,而從不去動筆寫,是寫不出好作文的,所謂的熟能生巧就是說的這一點.可以讓學生採用寫日記的方法來提高自己的表達能力,也可以就不同的題材,自擬題目來寫或者就某篇課文來擴寫、縮寫、改寫等,這些都可以用來練練手筆.也可以要求學生隨讀、隨學、隨寫,讀有所得,學以致用.
六、寫作步驟
1. 審題
在動筆之前,必須認真審題,分析命題意圖.根據題目確定文章體裁,考慮文章內容,把與題目有關的材料分析,整理加以取捨.對屬於同一類材料的擬出標題,作文審題在很大程度上關繫到整篇文章的成敗.有的考生唯恐時間不夠,急於成文,不認真審題,結果寫出的文章不是離題太遠,與原命題大相徑庭,就是抓不住重點,雜亂無章,缺乏邏輯性與關聯.
2. 列題綱
審明了題義,了解了命題的意圖,接下來就是列提綱.提綱有兩種形式,即標題式和句式.標題式提綱就是用短語和片語列出文章的層次和段落以及各層次、各段落的大致順序.這種提綱的特點是簡潔、清楚.句式提綱是用完整的句子列出的提綱,這種提綱提供了更加詳盡的輪廓.列提綱時,應防止兩種形式的混用,句式提綱是句子,而標題式提綱是名詞片語.列提綱時要盡量使用平行結構,編號要統一.有了提綱,文章在材料安排上才會層次分明,整體性強.
3. 起草稿
審明了題意,列出了提綱,下一步就是應該分段寫作.每段應該只有一個中心,段落的結構要完整.自然段多以該段的主題句開頭、中間展開說明和敘述,末句常是結論或內容的歸納.在推展主題目時,要充分利用學到的寫句子、寫段落的技巧,注意句與句、段與段的銜接和過渡.注意段落的完整性和連貫性.為了使文章緊湊,全文最好一氣呵成.
4. 修改
修改是寫好文章必不可少的一環.修改是指初稿完成後對文章從內容,形式到語言等進行加工提高,通過修改使文章達到主題明確,內容翔實、結構嚴謹,語法正確,無拼寫和標點錯誤.
5. 校閱
修改後的文章要認真抄寫一遍.謄寫時要注意:標題寫在第一行的中央,除介詞,連詞、冠詞外,標題中每一個實詞都應大寫.標題除了疑問句或感嘆句外,標題不加標點,即使是一個完整的句子,也不加句號;注意段落首縮進3-4個字母;書寫要工整,規范,卷面要整潔,詞與詞之間要有2-3個字母的間隔 ;抄寫完之後,一定要檢查一遍.校閱要逐字逐段進行,注意檢查語法錯誤,拼寫錯誤、標點和大小寫等方面的錯誤.花兩分鍾檢查一遍,往往能增強文章的效果、提高考試成績.
㈥ 英語作文怎麼寫啊
思路:
審好題
仔細審查所給的內容提示(包括文字和圖表等),明確要求寫的內容,確定文章的體裁、人稱、時態等,理順思路,確定主旨。
看要點,寫片段
對於易於表達的內容,一次成句;對於一時難於表達的內容,寫出片語。此時,既注意不遺漏內容要點,也不要隨意添加任何內容。
步驟:
定句型,連詞成句
這個環節是成文的關鍵,一定要注意做到:
(1)選用比較有把握的詞彙,用恰當的句型寫出確切反映內容要求的句子。在熟悉的基礎上,鼓勵多用高級詞彙和結構復雜的復雜句。如表達「為了……」時,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引導目的狀語從句。
(2)寫出的句子要達意,完整,語法正確,合乎習慣,特別是句式、謂語動詞形式要有根有據。
(3)表達限定的內容有困難時,就要想到「AllroadsleadtoRome.」這句話,用變通的方法,以達到「曲徑通幽」。如要譯「他表哥外強中干」這樣一句話,表達起來似乎很難,但我們完全可以通過學過的東西將這句話明白貼切地表達出來:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.
(4)盡量避免使用漢語式的英語。例如要表達「她睡得很遲」,不可寫成:Shesleptvery late.應該寫成:Shewent tobed verylate.因為「sleeplate」表示「睡懶覺」。又如要表達「他一點都不擔心他的英語」,不可寫成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.實際上意思完全相反,表達成「他非常擔心他的英語」了。應該是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.
連詞成句,添減相宜
單句寫出後,根據短文的內容要求,確定先寫什麼,後寫什麼,按照表述內容的情節發展和實際需要,重新排列組合已寫成的句子,劃分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
即:文章的開頭(Introction)、文章的主體(Mainbody)和文章的結尾(Conclusion).這樣寫成文章的初稿。在連詞成句的過程中,還要注意以下幾點:
(1)句子或段落間的連接不僅僅是個語言問題,也是個邏輯思維方面的問題,這兩者是不能分開的。能注意到這一點,你的文章就能達到條理清楚、層次分明的境界。
(2)為了使句子或段落語義連貫,表達合理准確,可以適當加入一些連接詞語。如表達轉折可用but,however,otherwise等,表達遞進可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表達因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表達對比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表達讓步可用though,although,evenif等。有時還需要加入一些必要的過渡句子以達到承上啟下的效果。
(3)仔細推敲在文章的哪些地方可用復雜句。切忌生搬硬套,給人一種為了用復雜句而用復雜句的感覺。要用得自然、得體。要順應行文的需要,與整個文章渾然一體。
盡量使用我們熟悉的賓語從句、狀語從句和定語從句。
檢查,修改,定稿,謄寫
檢查修改是進一步減少疏漏提高質量的最後程序,這時要對照題目要求,認真檢查以下幾點:
(1)內容有無遺漏或誤詞,最好一一對應檢查。
(2)體裁格式對不對。
(3)句子是否有語法結構錯誤,特別要檢查句子中的冠詞、代詞、名詞復數、動詞的時態、語態、主謂一致等方面是否有錯誤。
(4)句子是否合乎英語表達習慣,是否達意。
(5)書寫字跡和標點符號是否規范清晰,詞數是否基本上符合要求。經過認真修改潤色的短文,即可認真工整地謄寫在指定的卷面上。抄好後再速讀一遍,力求完美。
經典題例
下面以揚中樹人今年3月中考一模試卷的作文為例,談談寫中考英語作文的具體步驟和應注意的事項。
原題介紹
目前,揚州正在創建(create)全國文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作為一個中學生,我們在學校、在家裡、在公共場合等等應該做到哪些才能稱得上是一個文明的(civilized)人呢?我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻(makecontributionto)呢?請你就此寫一篇100字左右的短文。
Nowadays,________________________________________________________________
解題步驟
第一步:認真審題,明確寫作體裁、提示要點、文章的時態、人稱和詞數。
分析:
這篇作文的體裁是倡議書。文章主要有5大提示要點,考生可以用筆將這些要點圈出來。1.揚州正在創建全國文明城市。2.作為一個中學生在學校怎麼做才能稱得上是一個文明的人?3.作為一個中學生在家怎麼做?4.作為一個中學生在公共場所怎麼做?5.我們又如何為這個活動作貢獻呢?
這篇文章時態以一般現在時為主。人稱用第一人稱。詞數100個左右。
第二步:分析提示要點,用簡明的英語寫出要點。
分析:五大提示要點只有第一要點是限定的,考生可以直接翻譯。其餘四大要點都是半限定的、半開放性的。考生需要根據文章主題的需要聯系實際生活進行適當發揮。不同的考生會有不同的答案。這部分既是寫作的重點也是難點。考生可用簡明的英語寫出要點。如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.
第三步:列出寫作提綱,並將要點擴展成句。
開頭(Introction):Yangzhouiscreating a National Civilization City. As middle schoolstudents,weshould try our best to become civilized persons.
正文(Mainbody):
At school, we should keep our classroom cleanandtidy every day. We shouldnt throw about rubbish.
At home, we should help our parents dosomehousework.
In public places, we shouldnt make much noiseinpublic places. We mustnt cross the road until the trafficlightsturn green.
We can make a contribution to this event bygivingout leaflets to the citizens to make them understand theimportanceof this event and take part in it.
結尾 (conclusion):Iam sure Yangzhou will become a National Civilization Citysoon.
第四步:組句成文。
分析:根據文章內容和要求,可以適當調整以上句子的先後順序。為了使文章連貫自然,表達准確,適當加一些表達並列、遞進、因果、轉折等關系的連詞,然後組成文章,這時如果發現文章詞數不夠,可把短語變成句子,也可增添一些與表達內容有關的短語或句子。如:表達「在家」,不用「athome」.而用「When we areathome.」如果發現文章詞數超過要求,可以將句子變成短語或兩句並一句。
第五步:計劃時間,認真檢查、修改。
分析:
中考英語作文一般要求在20分鍾內完成。因此,考試時間有限,必須合理安排。成文後必須認真檢查修改。特別注意以下幾點:
1.內容是否符合要求,要點有無遺漏或誤解。
2.句子是否符合英語習慣,句型是否正確。
3.是否有語法錯誤。特別是冠詞、名詞的復數、代詞、主謂一致、時態、語態等方面。
4.是否有拼寫錯誤。
5.書寫是否有不清楚或不易辨認之處。
6.大小寫和標點符號是否使用得當。
7.詞數是否符合要求。
第六步:認真謄寫。
分析:
注意書寫清楚、規范,卷面整潔。中考20分作文,有兩分卷面整潔分。
下面是修改過的作文:
Yangzhou is creating a National CivilizationCity.As middle school students, we should try our best tobecomecivilized persons.
First, when we are at school, we should keepourclassroom clean and tidy. And we shouldnt throw aboutrubbish.Second, we should help our parents do some housework athome.Third, we shouldnt make much noise in public places. Besides,wemustnt cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.Whatsmore, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order tomakethem understand the importance of this event and take partinit.
If everyone makes a contribution to thisevent,Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.
㈦ 英語作文怎麼寫
一、使用短語,習語來代替一些單詞,增加文采,豐富語句的表現力。
在作文中,如果能適當地使用一些短語和習語是提高表達水平的一種有效方法。如:
二、使用一些倒裝句、強調句、或者感嘆句等,也可以為文章增添亮色
在一篇文章當中,大家使用最多的句子是主謂賓結構,如果能適當地打破常規,運用各種形式,就能給我們的文章增添亮色,給閱卷老師留下好印象,我們的作文自然能得到高分。大家可以嘗試下面的句子:
三、使用不同結構的句子,使句式多樣化
句子的多樣化包括兩方面,一個是句子結構的變化,一個是句子長度的變化。句子的結構要隨著文章思想發展而變化,單一的形式會給人單調枯燥的感覺,而句子的多樣化就會給文章增色。大家看下面例文:
上面的例文中,原文在語法上沒有什麼錯誤,就是過多的使用來there be 句型,使得文章單調乏味。我們可以轉換句式,同一個意思用不同的句式表達,這樣就使得文章內容豐富,有文采。
大家需要注意的是,句子結構的多樣化並不是要讓句子多復雜,而是要注意長短句結合。
四、選擇自己熟悉並且能正確表達的句子
英語作文中多以簡單句、並列句為主,主從句為輔。句子結構的好壞將會直接影響意義的表達和文章的質量。不熟悉的句子大家不能勉強使用。下面我們一起看看,在平時的練習中,大家經常犯的錯誤:
如,句子殘缺不全,缺少主語、謂語或其他成分;再如,不能正確使用標點符號或連詞;還有的同學錯誤將從句當作完整的句子。
㈧ 怎麼寫英語作文啊
先用中文編寫,在下載個中反漢語
㈨ 英語作文 怎麼寫啊
Give in the world best mother! you are a son heart best mother of the inside. This is my a little and small and small intention, and thank you so everything of the that many in the last yearses pay.The sometimes is not like like this, but the love that I am true you.Whole world perhaps and everywhere and all contain mother, but you are what I only one and most care.Wish your Mother's Day happiness!
㈩ 英語作文怎麼寫啊!
相對於英語的其它題目,作文的綜合要求可能更高一點,那麼我們就以這次考試的作文為例子來講講英語作文怎麼寫.
首先我先說說同學們在做作文的時候常常遇到的問題,然後我再給出一個大概的解決方法,最後呢,我們聯系這次考試的作文題來實戰一番.
從我們題目的要求來看,是一個記事的記敘文,並且是一個看圖說話類的,所有的素材都在我們的圖片裡面了.那麼我們就要先把圖片仔細的看一下,選好線索,顯然圖片裡面的鍾暗示我們選擇時間為我們的敘事線索.其次要選擇好一個時態的問題,我們可以以晚上回憶的方式來敘述這個事情。那麼都是過去時。
那麼開頭是一個比較困難的事情,大家也許不知道從何說起.這里我給出了一個例子.
Our
class
had
already
planned
to
go
to
Handian
Nursing
Home
to
visit
those
old
people
living
there
.
We
were
all
eager
to
go
there
as
soon
as
we
can.
And
today
this
time
really
came,
so
you
could
image
how
happy
we
were.
At
about
8:00
in
the
morning
,
with
tools
in
hands,
we
went
out
of
our
school
towards
the
Handian
Nursing
Home
下面我們不必過多的描述在路上的情形,我們重點將描述在敬老院裡面的情形.
It
was
about
9:00
when
we
arrived
there.
Though
we
were
a
little
tired,
none
of
us
wanted
to
have
a
rest.
As
some
of
those
old
people
seldom
came
out,
so
some
of
us
helped
them
walk
around
to
breathe
the
fresh
air.
Some
help
them
to
wash
their
clothes,
and
the
others
swept
the
ground.
Most
of
us
never
do
such
things
at
home,
so
we
maybe
didn』t
do
these
well,
but
we
all
tried
our
best.
At
about
11:55,we
had
lunch
with
them,
and
our
monitor
stood
for
us
to
bless
them
devoutly.
During
the
lunch
time,
we
were
all
very
happy.
After
lunch,
we
had
a
party
with
those
old
people.
Before
we
came
here,
we
had
already
prepared
some
songs
for
them.
As
we
expected,
they
all
felt
great
pleased
with
our
programs.
Though
maybe
we
didn』t
performed
well,
the
smile
on
their
faces
made
us
very
happy.
該到說再見的時候了,一定要注意收尾工作.
Happy
time
always
goes
fast.
Though
we
didn』t
notice
that
we
had
stayed
here
for
a
long
time,
the
clock
on
the
wall
informed
us
clearly
that
it
was
time
for
us
to
go
home.
So
we
had
to
say
good
bye
to
those
old
people.
On
the
way
home,
we
all
said
this
was
really
a
significant
day,
and
we
decided
to
come
back
again
whenever
we
had
time.