『壹』 英語作文糾錯.
有些句子我都不知道怎麼改啊,很chinese english的感覺~說點語法小錯誤吧~
disperse us attention--our attention
So this habit will rece our work efficiency may lead to the mistakes .
是什麼樣的文章?雅思的話最好不要用so,用therefore之類的比較正式。may 前面要加and或that,不然沒有主語或是個錯誤的復句。
use earphone listen to concert to cause hearing for a long time , have loud injury to we student .
這句好難改啊~我是中國人都有點不太明白。we student -嚴重的錯誤。也許你可以寫成:if students spend too much on listening the conert by earphone,it may effect the sense of hearing of students.
choose some melody in a quick rhythm it will make student feel nervous but choose one song in a slow rhythm will make student asleep in summer and winter .
我覺得choose是多餘的,你硬要寫的話應該要寫成choosing,其實直接寫quick rhythm melody就可以吧~make student fall asleep 更好吧~
其他的就是注意句式的多樣性,你一直在重復listening to the music while doing homework,3次。
就說這么多!
『貳』 英語作文 糾錯 有高級詞彙能用上的也幫忙說下
The Spring Festival is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do ring the holiday. Diffecent people have different ideas.
The girs think we should stay at home. Because we should relax ourselves and the homes are comfortable and COZY.FinalLy, the fare is low. The boys said that we should travel some places. If we do that we will not only increase our knowledge but also broaden the horizon.
However the boys said the girls' idea WAS not great , because we COULDN;T go through the naturAl by ourselves .And the grils said the boys' idea WAS too expensive and WAS not easy to PUT INTO PRACTICE.
PersonlLy ,I'd like to stay at home . Because the weather is so bad . I'm afraid of the cold wind . I think the home is the best place to stay . I can do something , like doing homework , watching TV , drawing...
『叄』 英語作文!求老師們糾錯!糾錯越多懸賞越多!
our destination was Chang Xing Island .
『肆』 英語作文糾錯
The correct sentences as follows:
I have three reasons to prove my word.
He always makes me happy when I encounter some difficult things.
He always stops me from doing wrong things.
The influence is both good and bad.
『伍』 英語作文糾錯 幫忙看下有無很嚴重的語法,用詞錯誤
簡單糾正一下語法錯誤,供參考
At present,social pratice has been (playing ) increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy( with their study )and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.
『陸』 大家有沒有好的英語糾錯軟體或者語法糾錯軟體推薦
英語語法來糾錯、語法糾錯方面源whitesmoke是比較不錯的,目前版本是2011,分為executive和general等版本,軟體非常棒,推薦: http://hi..com/whitesmoke2011/blog/item/c3b1ddcd380fb20d4854036d.html
『柒』 英語作文最後一段糾錯~謝謝
前面的長句顯然是套用的,沒有問題。內容提到問題的緊迫性,必須採取有效措施,如種樹以減少溫室效應。你接上的句子,語法不妥,我建議重組句子:
......considering the urgency of the problem,effective measures must be adopted before things deteriorate,for instance,we should plant more trees which could absorb the greenhouse gas so that the rate of global warning will sharply decrease. 【However, few people take this issue seriously even though they understand that a suitable climate will make them live a better life. Therefore, it is high time that concerted efforts and measures be taken to enhance the awareness of protecting the environment and to put an end to this situation; only then can our society become more colorful and harmonious to live in.】
【英語牛人團】
『捌』 糾錯,英語作文糾錯。我今年初三,幫忙看一下這篇作文有沒有什麼錯誤,謝謝~
1.Because I think it cannot only help us learn what is happening throughout the world,but also help us learn more knowledge. [can not分開來寫]
2.Summer is hot and we can felel comfortable when we are simming。[feel 拼寫錯誤]
3. And I think it is a waste of time to go to a summer school .[這句話換個位置,放在這段最後很奇怪,跟前面一句話連接不起來]
4.你專think重復使用太屬多次了,可以用 I consider / I believe/in my opinion 等
5.注意連詞的使用 可以用 In addition / Moreover 不要總用And
『玖』 我想練習寫英語四級作文,但是沒人批改,感覺做的沒什麼用,有沒有人推薦一下哪個網站能批改英語作文的,
不好意思我不知道什麼批改網 但是關於英語作文 可以分享一些有用的圖片給你 多看看並學以致用對提高寫作有好大作用的
『拾』 寫完英語作文無人批改糾錯怎麼辦
新東方現在有個新東方批改網,可以幫你批改,你注冊提交一下就行