Ⅰ 如何確保雅思寫作中心思想的統一性
為了方便雅思考生學習,下面我們來舉個例子。
請看下例:
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句,controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出現兩個irrelevant sentences,一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie,這一段是講的是Joe and I,中間出現一個Bella是不合適的。還有,Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關。考生在作文卷上常常因為造出irrelevant sentences(不相關語句)而丟分,值得引起注意。再看一個例子:
My name is Anne, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea是like to deep physically fit,但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences,一個是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出,native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了,造成偏題或離題,那問題就更嚴重了。
Ⅱ 英語作文常用句子總結
常用句子總結
1.開篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...
6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 註:用於句首提出論題或現象的句型
①Recently , …has become the focus of the society .
②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life . ③Nowadays there is a growing concern for … ④Nowadays it is common to hear /see …
⑤…has become a common occurrence in our daily life.
⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of … ⑦It is only ring the last /past few years that man has become generally aware that … ⑧There is an old / popular saying / proverb which says / goes … ⑨In recent years, there is a general tendency …
⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face. 2.證明
1) No one can deny the fact that ...
2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 4) Recent studies indicate that ...
5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...
6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ... 3.舉例
1) A good case in point is ...
2) As an illustration, we may take ... 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) ...is often cited as an example. 4.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this. 2)The reasons for this are as follows. 3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek. 5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例如: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people』s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life. 註:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
4-1. 基本原因 --- 分析某事物時, 用此句型說明其基本的或者多方面的原因. [1]. Why ...? For one thing… For another...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing...For another... Still another...
[3]. A number of factors, both physical and psychological affect.... /both indivial and social contribute to.... 4-2 另一原因 --------> 在分析了基本原因之後, 再補充一個次要的或者更重要時用! [1]. Another important factor is....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem. [3]. Certainly, the ... is not the sole reason for... 另附 :
1.)A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem). 2.). The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3.). The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... 4.). The factors that contribute to this situation include... 5.). The change in ...largely results from the fact that... 6.). We may blame... , but the real causes are... 7). Part of the explanations for it is that...
One of the most common factors (causes) is that... Another contributing factor (cause) is... Perhaps the primary factor is that… But the fundamental cause is that...
5.後果--------- 分析某事物可能造成的後果或者帶來的影響 . 1). It will proce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on.... 2). It involves some serious consequence for... 3) It may give rise to a host of problems. 4). The immediate result it proces is...
5). It will exercise a profound influence upon... 6). Its consequence can be so great that... 6.表示好處
1.)It has the following advantages. 2.)It does us a lot of good. 3.)It benefits us quite a lot. 4.)It is beneficial to us. 5.)It is of great benefit to us.
例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
7.表示壞處
1.)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2.)It does us much harm. 3.)It is harmful to us.
例如: However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our
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health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
8.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1.)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth. 2.)We think it necessary to do sth. 3.)It plays an important role in our life.
例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age. 9.表示措施
1.)We should take some effective measures.
2.)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties. 3.)We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4.)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例如: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it. 10.表示變化
1.)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2.)A great change will certainly be proced in the world』s communications. 3.)The computer has brought about many changes in ecation.
例如: Some changes have taken place in people』s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
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Ⅲ 英語作文具體怎麼寫,請求高手幫忙,
一、寫作
(一)存在問題
1.不會寫
所謂不會寫指的是,當考試拿過一篇文章不知如何下手,不知如何提筆進行寫作。筆者認為主要是存在以下兩個原因:一是考生的確無話可說;二是心裡雖然有話,但是拿捏不準該寫哪句為妙。於是思前想後、猶豫不決,始終不敢提筆進行寫作。
2.寫不好
所謂寫不好就是,拿過作文題,沒有明確的寫作思路,不按套路出牌;或是簡單漢語邏輯思維寫作,不符合英語寫作標准,近而沒有文采。原因在於:第一是平時沒有養成良好的寫作習慣;第二對於英語寫作的句式特點以及整體文章結構框架不了解。
(二)解決辦法
第一,首先必須熟悉英語四級寫作具體要求。英語四級考試要求考生在30分鍾內寫出120字的文章。體材主要有議論文(分為「Topic題型」和 A&B又稱「正反觀點題」)應用文(主要是書信)、圖表文等。針對不同的體裁,寫作思路是不同的。比如,以議論文舉例來說:
1.議論文寫作思路
2.議論文分類:闡述主題型作文(Topic);正反觀點型作文(A&B)
3.闡述主題型作文寫作:(這類題型作文要求從一句話或一個主題出發,按照提綱的要求進行論述)
(1)基本寫作格式
5. 正反觀點型作文(A&B)(這類題型作文通常從正反兩方面來分別論述,最後得出你自己的結論。採用論點加論據寫作形式。)
(1)基本寫作格式
第二,熟悉英語寫作的幾個重要概念。
1.英語文章段落結構特點
英語文章段落結構一般有三部分構成:主題句+擴展句+結尾句
(1)主題句:所謂主題句,就是英語文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語文章段落的靈魂,在英語文章段落中居於主導地位。我們都知道英語文章一般喜歡開門見山,所以主題句一般位於英語文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開。
(2)擴展句:所謂擴展句就是為主題句起解釋說明或論證的句子。通常我們寫擴展句所採用的方法是舉例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列數據(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)結尾句:所謂結尾句就是總結句。英語寫作也類似於漢語寫作,最後再把自己本段落的寫作目的陳述一下。但是在英語寫作中結尾句畢竟還是少數。
因此我們通常看到英語的文章段落結構 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴展句構成。
2.主旨句
作為主旨句就是英語文章的中心思想句。英語文章一般首先用一句話概括一下作者的寫作目的或意圖,我們就把這句話稱之為主旨句。沒有受過寫作訓練的考生是不會寫主旨句的。因此這樣的文章就不能夠稱之為好的英語文章,自然也得不到閱卷人的青睞了。
第三,學會遣詞造句
1.遣詞:
(1)詞彙等級
所謂詞彙的等級就是,我們在寫作的過程中,如果想出一個基本詞彙來之後,能夠在這個基本詞彙的基礎上把它在提升一下,也就是我們一般寫作所提倡的用「難詞 」。比如,我們一提到「重要的」,大多數同學首先會想到「important」這個單詞,那麼提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義詞:significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc
(2)詞彙准確性
所謂詞彙的准確性是指,我們在有一個詞近而想到它的同義詞之後,要結合語境選擇恰當的用詞。在這里必須指明的是,並不是詞彙等級越高越好,必須還要考慮到適合於不同的語境。比如,眼睛大,這個「大的」形容詞,我們首先會想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那麼是不是用後面的詞就可以了呢?或者說用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢?答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用後面的詞來修飾眼睛是不可以,只能用big,因為我們聽過一首英文歌曲叫做「I am a big big girl, in a big big world.」big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛的。
2.造句:
(1)片語
很多考生平時寫作不太擅長用片語,對於他們而言最習慣的就是想到漢語,然後對應漢語思維寫出英語句子,這種寫作只能是單詞的羅列組合,談不上什麼技巧文采可言,因此,寫出來的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流水,沒有英語的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎上,進一步想到與之同義的片語,那麼文章就會顯得與眾不同,更具有英語的味道。比如上面所說的「重要的」這個單詞,當我們想到important的時候,如果從語法角度再稍加考慮一下,我們會想到「be of importance」。因為,語法中規定:形容詞等於of加這個形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步,我們還學過一個常用的片語叫做「play an important role in---」。很多同學說自己的文章湊不夠字數或是沒有文采,那麼採用片語進行寫作是不是就可以解決以上問題了呢?
(2)句式
除了採用片語,要使文章更具英語的味道,我們還需要變換句式。沒有受過正規作文訓練的考生,通常採用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。於是我們看到大多數的文章充斥著這樣的形式:I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。
寫作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種:一是插入語;二是倒裝。
第一,插入語。
所謂插入語,英語中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個逗號之間引起的成分稱之為插入語;第二種是有兩個半破折號引起的成分稱之為插入語。如下所示(黑體劃線處):
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入語的作用主要有兩個,一個是突出主語,比如說:He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.
第二個作用是解釋說明,比如說:People, especially students, should work hard.
第二,倒裝
倒裝是我們寫作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套,但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種:
Only + 時間狀語
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介詞片語
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定詞位於句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom)
在我一生當中很難遇到這樣的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地點方位名詞位於句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
(3)修辭
無論是漢語寫作還是英語寫作,修辭其實非常的重要。它是作者寫作功底具體事例地展現。所謂修辭包括比喻、擬人、排比等等。英語寫作中的修辭問題我已經專門寫過一篇文章(見《英語寫作幾種修辭手法》)。這里僅舉一個比喻例子,還是拿「重要的」來舉例。當你用完片語之後,如果你用上下面比如句子,則文章就會顯得神采飛揚,試比較:
The bicycle is important for us.
The bicycle is of importance for us.
The bicycle plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.
那麼很明顯,最後一個句子是我們最終拿到考場上去搏擊高分的句子。
第四,平時要注意積累
很多考生為了寫好作文也作了好多工作,課下也付出了很多,包括背誦大量的文章等等,但是提筆寫作時候,仍不見的有所改觀。問題在哪裡呢?
我認為,很多考生雖然也背誦文章,但卻只是死記硬背。如果合上書本讓他復述,他們就會卡殼。就是茶壺里煮餃子,倒不出來。我們說背誦是個輸入的過程,而說和寫則是輸出的過程。我們真正需要的是把平時積累的隨時隨地用在我們的寫作中。因此,我們在注重積累的同時,一定在平時練習的時候,把他們多家運用。只有多練多用,才能真正達到學以致用,才能真正提高寫作水平。(濟南新東方學校 趙曉棟)
特別說明:由於各方面情況的不斷調整與變化,搜學網所提供的考試信息僅供參考,敬請考生以權威部門公布的正式信息為准。
Ⅳ 形容文化的統一性用什麼英語單詞好
用句子吧?不過你的問題是什麼意思?Describe the culture of unity
Ⅳ 幫忙寫幾句英語作文常用的總結性好句子吧!
In a conclusion
In a word 總而言之
Ⅵ 關於英語寫作(句子的語法)
句子的開頭就是主語吧,主語當然不能用動詞,只能用名詞性質的單詞或者短語,這不單單是寫作里的語法,而是滲透在英語各個方面中的語法。其實個人認為,學好語法最大的優勢就是英語寫作,幫助作文整體的嚴密工整,所以如果要學好語法的話,還是建議買一本好的語法書,每天多看多練,還有就是模仿優秀英語作文中的語句和寫作技巧,會有很大幫助的哦~
Ⅶ 英語寫作的精彩短語和句子
給你一些好的連接詞什麼的吧!
That
is
to
say也就是說
In
other
words換句話說
Not
only......but
also不但.....而且
what's
more還有
futher
more還有
Ⅷ 英語句子前後統一的問題
你看法對的,那teacher語法教條主義者。語法是服務於表達需要的,隨時而變,非僵死教條