高中英語七次課沖刺高考滿分寫作

㈠ 如何寫出一篇滿分的高中英語作文

1.仔細審題是關鍵，立意鮮明效果現。
英語書面表達中，只有正確審題，理清要點，才能把握寫作方向和要求。要分析情景，弄清體裁，透過圖畫、圖表、提綱、文字描述等情景呈現形式看到內容。如看圖作文中，不能單純地望'圖'生義，一味地重視圖示內容。應將圖示內容與寫作背景幾所學知識結合起來，由圖內看到圖外，排除無用信息，扣緊文章主題。
2.減少語病，盡量使用熟悉句型。
句子結構的好壞直接影響意義的表達和文章的質量，在平時的寫作練習中，考生經常會犯一些錯誤，如句子殘缺不全，缺乏主語、謂語或其它必要成分;必須要牢記掌握一些常用句型或習慣表達，避免中文式英語，在實踐中不斷養成用英語思維寫作的習慣。如：Is it a good thing or a bad thing? Different people have different viewpoints, In my opinion, we should……
3.確定時態及人稱，內容連貫，結構緊湊。
高考書面表達評分標准明確規定，如人稱錯誤要扣分，不同的文體一般都有基本時態。日記通常記敘發生過的事情，多用一般過去時。議論文多用一般現在時，通知等文體通常用一般將來時。每個句子寫好之後，句與句之間要選擇恰當的連接詞。比如：
(1)表示承接、遞進用語，besides(並且)、what's more(並且)，moreover(而且)，firstly,secondly,finally(最後)，from now on (從此)，afterwards I after that(後來)，to make things worse/ what's worse(使事情更為糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。
(2)表示轉折關系用語。but bowever,otherwise,though,despite,in spite of...(盡管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(盡管)，all the same(盡管如此)。
(3)表示因果關系用語。because/because of......for(因為)，owing to (由於)，thanks to (由於)，e to (由於)，so that (結果)。
(4)歸納總結用語。to summarize(總而言之)，in short/in a word(簡而言之)，on the whole(從總體看)，generally speaking(一般說來)，in my view(我的觀點)，in conclusion(總之)。

㈡ 高考如何沖刺滿分作文

我們老師教我們，作文想拿高分，第一段要用排比句，如果有材料最內好是開篇點題容。中間舉例子，一個正面一個反面，或2個正面1個反面。結尾要與開頭照應，意思是也要點題，我們老師講改卷老師不會看全文的，除非你寫的非常好！因為他們一天要改好多試卷的，還有就是字跡要清楚，因為有卷面分的。
在平時多看點文學作品，這樣寫文章更優美，如果來不及，那就買本比較經典的文段書，慢慢看，講不定會用到呢！

㈢ 2019高考英語滿分作文

2018·全國Ⅰ卷

假定你是李華，你的紐西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗。請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1. 到達時間；

2. 合適的禮物；

3. 餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Terry,

How
are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to
a Chinese friend』s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some
relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you
are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare
the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you』d better
bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What』s more, when you
are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing
food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 全國Ⅱ卷

你受學生會委託為校宣傳欄「英語天地」寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英語短片Growing Together，內容包括：

1. 短片內容：學校的發展；

2. 放映時間、地點；

3. 歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Notice

In
order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding
English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from
2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the
Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin
with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the
development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only
meaningful but also interesting. What』s more, everyone of you will be
welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a
heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student UnionJune

2018 · 全國III卷

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信，內容包括：

1. 學校的體育場館；

2. 主要的運動項目；

3. 你喜歡的項目。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右：

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【滿分範文】

Dear Peter,

I
am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last
letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following
information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous
new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our
school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports
events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as
running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I』m intoxicated
with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第一節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件，內容包括：

1. 表示歡迎；

2. 推薦他上哪所大學；

3. 建議他做哪些准備工作。

注意：1. 詞數不少於50；

2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【滿分範文】

Dear Jim,

I』m
so glad to hear your future ecation plan in Beijing in your last
letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am
sure you will have the most unforgettable experience ring your
college in Beijing.

Learning your keen interest in Chinese
culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best
universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you
where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich
culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The
Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be
helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.

I
sincerely hope your dream will come true and it』s my pleasure to show
you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further
questions, please feel free to let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

2018 · 北京卷 · 第二節

假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國學生，帶領他們體驗中國茶文化的全過程。

注意：詞數不少於60。

ards
the mountains. 'Don』t be late for supper,' Uncle Paul cried, 'and keep
to the track so that you don』t get lost!' 'OK! ' my dad cried back.
After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so
peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green
pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It
looked like a beautiful woven(編織的）blanket spread out upon the ground
just for us.

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.

注意：

（1）所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

（2）至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語：

（3）續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

（4）續寫完成後，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。

Paragraph
1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

Paragraph
2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting
dark._______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________

【滿分範文】

Paragraph 1

Suddenly
a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I
yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse
from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident,
the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed
closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse
and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get
lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.

Paragraph 2

We
had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we
were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of
water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the
riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may
lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time
appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and
before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but
memorable experience it was!

2018 · 天津卷

假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀於天津某國際學校，他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊，參加即將於7月底在天津舉行的世界青少學機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。

（1）比賽的時間、地點；

（2）邀請他的原因；

（3）訓練計劃將發送其郵箱，請他提出建議。

注意：

（1）詞數不少於100；

（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

【參考詞彙】

世界青少年機器人技能競賽 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition

Dear Chris,

I have good news to tell you.

I』m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【滿分範文】

Dear Chris,

I
have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers』
interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to
throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World
Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children』s
palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a
good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each
other meanwhile.

I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make
acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know,
you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous
competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this
field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By
working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring
others' strong points as well as double our achievements.

If you
are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training
program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could
bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I』m
looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

2018 · 江蘇卷

請閱讀下面文字,並按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。

Li Jiang 6 July, Sunny

Our
family will go on a trip next month and need a suitcase. Two days ago,
Mom asked me to find relevant information on the internet. But the
information I got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. Confused, I
simply based my decision on the ratings. Within five minutes, we
ordered the one we were satisfied with. This afternoon, Mom received the
case and told me she liked it very much.

Su Hua 6 July, Sunny

This
morning, our family went out, hanging round in the downtown area. We
found a rating of the Top Ten Restaurants, and went into one of them. We
spent quite a lot of money, but were not happy. Mom complained a lot,
and said that despite its high ratings, the food was not to our taste. I
was puzzled. Should I believe in these ratings, or should I not?

【寫作內容】

1. 用約30個詞概括上述利用排名（ratings）進行消費的現象；

2. 談談你如何看待消費排名，然後用2-3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

【評分標准】

內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

【滿分範文一】

As
a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient
source of information for shopping in our own consumption.
Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on
different consumers.

I tend to consult consumption ratings
whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality
of the proct, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my
beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods.
Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For
example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often
confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and
economical to buy books according to the ratings.

There is no
doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in
consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often
closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards
ratings.

【滿分範文二】

Nowadays,
most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These
ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in
customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes
unsatisfactory.

There is no denying that such ratings might bring
convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable.
As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others』 judgment on the
proct or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need
or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others'
advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be
neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful
manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice
for some to pay for good ratings on their procts or services so as to
increase their sales.

Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

㈣ 英語高考滿分作文

簡述經濟法的主要內容

㈤ 衡水中學高考英語作文滿分背誦100篇翻譯作文應用文徵文、演講稿

turns the spirit back to st.

㈥ 高考英語作文如何得滿分

為大家准備了1一些黃金寫作句型，背熟這些黃金寫作句型，2018高考英語寫作必將無限接近滿分，同學們每天堅持被1句都還來得及啊！大家一定要堅持喲~

㈦ 近幾年英語高考滿分作文

2007年高考英語讀寫任務題品讀
一、試題：第二節 讀寫任務(共l小題，滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文，然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[寫作內容]
假設你就是信中的Ari，父親在你出生的時候寫了這封信。今天是父親50歲生日，你准備以寫信的方式，祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內容(信的開頭和結尾已經為你寫好)：
1．以約30個詞概括父親在他信中對你的期望；
2．以約120個詞表達你對父親的感恩，並包括如下要點：
(1)讀信後的感受；
(2)以你自己成長的經歷說明你的感受；
(3)表達你對父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標准]
概括准確，語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

二、評分標准
項目 分值 評分標准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 沒有增加與原文無關的信息, 沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結構正確，行文規范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相關的信息, 有個別句子抄自原文。語言結構基本正確，行文比較規范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含較多不相關的信息, 有較多的抄襲原。語言結構不夠正確，行文不夠規范。
0---1 沒有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相關的信息, 大多數句子都照抄原文。語言結構不正確，行文不規范。
寫作 18---20 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，內容豐富。詞彙豐富，用詞得當。能有效運用合適的語言結構，而且沒有（或較少）語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性好。
14---17 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題明確，個別內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用了合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
11---13 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內容要點。主題比較明確，個別內容不準確或不相關。詞彙較豐富，有個別用詞錯誤。較好地運用合適的語言結構，有少許的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性較好。
7---10 包含題目所給的部分內容要點。主題基本明確，有些內容不準確或者不相關。詞彙有限，有較多的用詞錯誤。語言結構出現較多的語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
4---6 只包含題目所給的個別內容要點。多數內容不相關或者不準確。文章有些地方照抄原文。詞彙貧乏，有較多的用詞錯誤。大多數的句子出現語法錯誤。篇章結構的連貫性差。
1---3 只包含與題目所給要點內容有關的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。詞彙及其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒有正確的句子。篇章結構零亂。
0 以下幾種情況，給0分：
1） 完全抄襲原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不對題
3） 只寫一些零散的單詞，完全沒有表達完整的內容。

三、任務型寫作評卷場評分細則
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板機械地抄，不改變原文順序 1分
3．改變主語或賓語的抄為主 2 分 (靈活地抄)
4．稍為改動總體的抄 3分
5．改變句子、用詞，重新排列組織 4—5分 (字數不特別要求)
◆120字自主寫作
1．感想，語言，內容，連貫性
2．語言為主, 內容的相關部分，綜合考慮連貫
3．首先看語言是否合格
4．內容： 讀後的感受, 成長的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了閱讀理解中的素材不算抄襲
6．內容偏離的時候以語言為主

四、學生習作選評給分情況
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but also you do every think is e to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I』ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn』t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.

2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won』t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum』s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won』t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.

3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don』t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I st hope can live happily and have a strong body. What』s more, wish you will healthy forever.

4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I』m totally moved by your words, my great father. I』m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn』t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I』m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can』t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.

5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn』t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn』t do well for myself.
I can』t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.

㈧ 高考滿分英語作文

首先來了解一下英語作文的評分標准
各個檔次的給分范圍及標准(滿分25分)
A.第五檔(很好)：(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.覆蓋所有內容要點。3.應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。4.語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致;具備較強的語言運用能力。5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。6.完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
B.第四檔(好)：(16-20分)1.完全完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。6.達到了預期的寫作目的。
C.第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)1.基本完成了試題規定的任務。2.雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。3.應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。5.應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。6.整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
D.第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)1.未恰當完成試題規定的任務。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。5.較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。6.信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
E.第一檔(差)：(1-5分)1.未完成試題規定的任務。2.明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。3.語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。4.較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。5.缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。6.信息未能傳達給讀者。
F.不得分：(0分)未能傳達給讀者任何信息：內容太少，無法評判;寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
從上面可以看出英語作文高分的關鍵因素及高分秘訣：
三點關鍵定檔因素(不跑題是前提)
詞彙多樣性
語法復雜性
文章連貫性
書面表達的五項秘訣：
審題，遣詞，造句，潤色，謀篇
既然知道了這些關鍵因素和高分秘訣，我們要如何從這些方面入手呢?
審題的概念
拿到試卷後，首先瀏覽書面表達的題目，研究題目要求。正確的審題內容包括A、審標題B、審體裁C、審要點。審標題：看文章是否要求有題目(title)或者主題(topic)能夠確保你不跑題;審體裁：確能夠定文章的文體，為你寫作提供方向。審要點：如果英語作文中，有要求要點的，一般打分時是踩點給分的，准確把握住要點，是高分的一個訣竅。
如何審要點?要做到以下兩個方面：
總結歸納要點：不是所有內容都要寫出來，而是抓住其中的關鍵要點、銜接要點!
理順要點：將提煉的要點按邏輯關系(如時間關系、因果關系、轉折關系等)重新安排，這樣整篇文章看起來就整體有序，流暢自然，更加容易打動評分老師，從而作文分數提升一檔。
構思文章提綱：根據題目的要點，安排好段落和主次關系。要形成良好的分段意識，寫作分段是必須要進行的(2至4段為佳)，這樣顯得文章不會擁擠並且層次分明。在行文意識上，要注意突出要點。
遣詞的注意點
不出現語言錯誤
詞語和短語搭配
適度使用加分詞彙
避免詞語重復

㈨ 如何沖刺高考滿分作文

【如何沖刺高考滿分作文】
作文得滿分？幾率很低！一般教師因工作量大，不會認真去讀，即便讀了，你也確實寫得不錯，那也不會隨便給滿分！ 要得滿分，有以下途徑！ 第一、你得特別有水平，能夠出乎其類，拔乎其萃！（註：一般學生沒這水平）同時，閱養卷老師得很有水平，能慧眼識英才！（註：一般教師沒這水平） 第二、教師打分時寫錯了！ 第三、買通教師！ 第四、減輕教師負擔，你去幫他閱卷！ 緊扣話題擬妙題 近年來中考作文大多為話題作文。相對命題作文和半命題作文而言，話題作文首先要求學生圍繞話題擬一個恰當的題目。但常常見到話題作文的考卷上，或因粗心不寫題目；或因懶於思考直接用原話題；或缺乏創新，擬定的題目千篇一律，毫無新意。這樣，都會不同程度地對整篇文章產生不良影響。要知道，一個巧妙的題目不僅能調動閱讀老師的閱讀興趣，而且能讓閱卷老師很快捕捉到文章所要表達的中心，為進一步理解全文奠定基礎。 當然，擬題是需要技巧的，或以題揭示中心，或以題引人深思。或借用修辭，或巧用詩句，或展開聯想，例如，以「夢」、「夢想」為話題，下面這些題目都令人耳目一新。《想做英雄》《我生活在夢想的盒子里》（以題揭示中心），《現實和夢想有多遠》（以題引人深思），《夢如潮水》《給心靈插上翅膀》（借用修辭），《手可摘星辰》《夢想與人生齊飛》（巧用詩句），《種子的夢想》《化作輕風》（展開聯想）。求真求深立新意 考場作文在立意上主要存在三個方面的問題：一是立意不真或空喊高調，矯揉造作；或編造悲劇，博得同情；二是立意不深。敘述生活，卻不能深層次地挖掘生活中潛隱的哲理；三是立意不新。不能多角度審視生活，品味生活，尤其是不能寫出自己對生活獨特的心靈體驗。如果同學們在考場上注意以上三點，就能在作文立意上獨顯風格。下面這篇習作之所以能得到認可，就是因為在立意上求真，寫出了自己真實的生活，獨特的心裡感受，同時也挖掘出了生活背後令人深思的哲理。 「……面對這一切（指學業上所遇到的艱難痛苦），我想逃避，但看到父母眼中閃爍著期待的目光，我又不忍心這樣做。無意間，看到李敖說的一句話：『不怕苦，苦半輩子；怕苦，苦一輩子，』僅僅十三個字，就徹徹底底地征服了我，讓我心中樹起一座標牌，上面清晰地刻著『苦』字，然後是一個前進的標志。其實，真正地習慣了苦的生活，反而變得充實起來。一天忙碌之後，感覺如同沐浴後那樣舒坦、愜意。」多個角度選新材 考場作文選材，要注意以下兩點： （一）貼近自身生活。用親身經歷的事或真實的內心感受作為材料。切忌文章大半篇幅引用或概述他人文章內容，這樣，會因缺乏自我而得不到認可。（二）貼近社會生活。選取具有時代色彩的新鮮材料，憑借材料本身的現實意義，增強文章的說服力。 有許多同學生活積累、閱讀積累都比較欠缺，作文時一事一議，就事論事，不能旁徵博引，文章顯得很單薄。而那些能用豐富材料表現中心的文章，常常能得到好評： 「聽說拿破崙是從炮兵干起，卓別林是從跑龍套開始，本茨是從手工組裝創辦了『賓士』公司，麥當勞（創建初期時）每一位員工要上的第一堂課就是洗廁所，連總裁也不例外。『合抱之木，起於毫末；九層之台，起於壘土；千里之行，始於足下。』財富是一分一分積攢起來的，智慧是一點一滴積累起來的，而成功則是一步一步腳踏實地走出來的。相形之下，有許多人似乎對小事不屑一顧，身上更多的是一種傲氣與浮躁，缺少一種從基層干起的務實精神，這正是通向成功之路的最大忌諱（《千里之行，始於足下》吳一塵）短短一段文字，小作者選用了四個典型材料，一句警示之語，不僅使文章內容顯得充實，文章中心也得到了充分體現。別具匠心巧構想 所謂構思主要指用怎樣的方式去表達文章的中心。也許圍繞一個話題，同學們會有相同的立意，但如何更好地表達，卻是一個仁者見仁，智者見智的問題。遇到這種，同學們最好用自己最擅長的文體來構思文章，或記敘，或議論，或抒情，甚至還可以採用童話、寓言、戲劇、故事新編等獨特新穎的形式。盡量不用自己不擅長的文體。個性語言展風彩 著名作家丁玲曾說：「沒有美的語言，就沒有文學，至少沒有好的文學。」可見語言表達在作文中所佔的分量。但什麼樣的語言是美的語言呢？ 「懦夫苟安於溫室，勇者跋涉於險峰。」（《嘗試的魄力》羅賽）「當你失敗時，守住你的信念，保護好你的尊嚴，做次勇敢挑戰者！是跪著，是站著，你自己選。」（《放棄與堅持的距離》白梅）「感謝你賜予我的關愛。天冷時的問候，病床前的照顧；書桌前的關心，臨走時的叮嚀；高興時的分享，郁悶時的談心；成功時的喝采，失敗時的鼓勵，籠罩著我，滋潤著我。」（《給母親的一封信》栗宛） 節選的幾段文字都是很美的語言，但它的美不完全在於詞句的華麗。或敘事，或抒情，或慷慨議論，或哲理沉思，都是小作者平時寫作所形成的個性化語言的集中體現，顯得很自然。在考場上，自然而個性化的語言最能博得贊賞。不要為增加文采而矯揉造作否則會弄巧成拙，失去自我。