① 跪求英語6級作文模板。（100分）
Global Shortage of Fresh Water
1. 人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水……）
2. 實際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增長、工業用水增加、污染……）
3. 我們應該怎麼辦
【範文】
At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never be used up because we can find it not only from the rain, but also in the rivers, lakes and wells. Consequently, it is not necessary for us to worry about global shortage of fresh water.
In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate actions. With the world population increasing rapidly year after year, water resources are being consumed at an appalling speed. What's more, with the development of science and technology, modern instry needs much more water than before. Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem—water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable because of instrial wastes.
We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources. The government should increase the efficiency of water usage by such methods as water recycling and purification of sea water. The people, on the other hand, should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water. Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled, if we ever want to improve the quality of life.
【點評】
本篇範文的最大特色是將批駁類與辦法類結合，首段指出一些人的錯誤認識；第二段從三方面進行批駁；第三段指出我們的做法。
範文首先指出，一些人認為淡水是取之不盡的，然後在第二段中進行批駁。首先，水資源正在被以驚人的速度消費。其次，現代工業需要更多的水資源。另外，因為工業污染，有些水已經不適宜飲用了。第三段闡述正確做法，即政府提高水資源的利用率、人人養成節約用水的習慣以及有效地控制水污染。
第一段第一句中的take it for granted表示「想當然」，be used up表示「用完，耗盡」。第三段第一點中的efficiency，recycling和purification分別指「效率」、「再循環」和「凈化」。
預測作文（二）
Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?
1. 近年來越來越多的民工湧入大城市
2. 產生這一社會現象的原因
【範文】
For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities. Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.
First and foremost, the limited land can no longer proce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population. In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work. Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good ecation.
I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.
【點評】
本題談論的是一種社會現象。第一段首句引入某一現象，第二句舉例說明，第三句是個過渡句，引起下面解釋原因段落的第二段；第三段是簡潔的結束語，其中的賓語從句嵌套一個狀語從句。
範文首先指出大量農民工湧入大城市這一現象，並引出第二段所闡述的三個原因。首先，農村有限的土地不能滿足日益增長的人口消費。其次，大城市有更多的工作機會。最後，農民工嚮往大城市的生活，想永遠居住在大城市。末段總結指出，如果創造一個健康的社會環境，農民工就可以為國家做出更大的貢獻。
第一段第二句中的construction site表示「建築工地」，babysitter表示「幫人看孩子的人」。第二段第一點中的rural指「農村的」；第三點中的permanently和admire分別指「永久地」和「羨慕」，receive ecation指「接受教育」。
預測作文（三）
Silence Is Gold
1. 許多場合中「沉默是金」是正確的
2. 但也有例外的情形
3. 結論
【範文】
When we talk of the famous proverb "Silence is Gold", we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.
This proverb is especially true under several situations. First, if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not sure. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.
Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions. If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it out. And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, we should feel free to help them.
In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases "silence is gold", but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.
【點評】
本文的特色在於其並未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的諺語，而是從正、反兩個方面去分析，即第二段指出其正確性，第三段談例外情況；末段總結，呼應全文。
範文首先提出所要討論的諺語「沉默是金」。第二段分三個方面闡述其正確性，即發誓保守秘密，對於不確定的事情要保持沉默，而在表達自己的思想時，力求簡潔。第三段指出例外，為別人指出錯誤或為朋友等提建議時，不要堅持「沉默是金」。末段總結，呼應第二、三段。
第一段中的label...as...表示「將……看作……」，而explore... in depth表示「深入探究……」。第二段第一點中的make a promise表示「允諾」，let out a secret表示「泄露秘密」，keep silent表示「保持沉默」；第三點中的brevity is the soul of wit也是個諺語，表示「言貴簡潔」。第三段第二點中的acquaintance指「熟人」。
預測作文（四）
A Letter of Application
1. 表達自己對該工作的渴求態度
2. 盡量展示自己的技能和經歷
3. 信中應包括自己的聯系方式
【範文】
January , 2010
Dear Sirs,
I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.
I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them e to my hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. In the e process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,
Jenny Green
【點評】
這篇文章是一篇非常成功的求職信。首段表明了自己對經理助理這一職位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知這一職位的，而後說明自己的條件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，說明自己在專業上是個尖子生，並指出對於其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅實的基礎；後兩句說明自己參加了各種學校活動，培養了多方面的能力。第三段首句說明自己非常希望能早日獲得面試的機會；次句說如果對方太忙，可以打電話聯系；末句對對方表示感謝，是一句客套話。
首段中的keen表示「熱切的」， parallel這里做動詞，表示「與……相當，比得上」。第二段首句中的specialized area表示「專業領域」；第二句中的excel是不及物動詞，表示「突出，超常，勝過他人」；第三句中的edge表示「優勢」；第四句中的a variety of等於various,表示「多種多樣的」；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示「團隊精神」，interpersonal skills表示「人際交往的能力」。
1. 上圖所示為2001年7月、2002年7月、2003年1月我國上網用戶總人數，請描述其變化；
2. 請說明發生這些變化的原因；
3．你認為目前用戶在網際網路使用中有什麼困難或問題。
【範文】
From the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from 26.5 million in July 2001 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59.1 million in January 2003.
In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. First, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream. Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford it.
The negative effects of the Internet are also clear. To begin with, sitting too long before the computers is harmful to our body, especially our eyes. Second, more and more people become inlged in playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.
All in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.
【點評】
首段敘述從2001年至2003年我國上網用戶總人數的變化趨勢。第二段分兩方面給出其中的原因：首先是網際網路方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是費用降低。第三段分兩個方面指出面臨的困難和問題：首先是上網時間過長有害健康；其次是有些人上網玩游戲、聊天，這都是不好的習慣。第四段做總結：第一句指出利大於弊；第二句說關鍵在於好好利用網際網路。
第二段首句中的in my mind意思是「依我看，在我看來」；第三段中的be harmful to意為「對……有傷害」，become inlged in意思是「沉迷於」，time-consuming是「浪費時間」的意思；最後一段首句中的outweigh意為「比……重要」。
② 有沒有適合英語六級作文用的諺語
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