The essay can be structurally divided into three parts.
Part 1: This part consists of 3 paragraphs, from Paragraph 1 to Paragraph 3. The central topic is that exercise, even moderate exercise, may lead to reduced iron in the blood of women. Then three groups of people are mentioned as suffering from iron deficiency: endurance athletes, women starters of a program of moderate exercise showing evidence of iron loss and new exercisers with the normal diet showing a decrease in iron levels.
Part 2: This part is made up of 3 paragraphs, from Paragraph 4 to Paragraph 6. Paragraph 4 tells us that iron deficiency is very common among women and the general causes for it. Paragraph 5 deals with one specific cause: the average woman takes in only two thirds of the recommended daily allowance for iron and any additional iron loss from exercise may be enough to tip her over the edge into a more serious deficiency. Paragraph 6 deals with another specific cause: exercise can result in iron loss through a variety of mechanisms.
Part 3: This part is made up of 6 paragraphs, from Paragraph 7 to Paragraph 12.
Paragraphs 7 and 8 tell us there are three stages of iron deficiency and that if you’re stage 3, it means your iron reserves go to zero and you’re in trouble. Paragraph 9 recommends one way to check the amount of iron storage in the blood. Paragraphs 10 to 12 suggest specific ways to correct iron deficiency in blood. Paragraph 10 is about adding more iron-rich foods to the diet, Paragraph 11 about selecting food with “iron-added” labels, cooking food in iron pans and avoiding coffee or tea with meals and Paragraph 12 about paying attention to warning signs of iron deficiency before iron reserves are gone.
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| Iron deficiency in blood: Three stages of iron deficiency: the first stage no symptoms; the second stage with not enough iron; and in the third stage, people often feel weak, tired. And if you’re stage 3, your iron reserves going to zero, you’re in trouble. Paras. 7-8 |
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Check iron deficiency: Take a better method to check the amount of iron storage in the blood and it’s advisable for both women and men to have a yearly blood test to check blood iron reserves. |
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