We have found through Text Structure Analysis that many essays are governed by a pattern from a general statement to specific details, reasons, facts or examples. But now, in this article about the Bermuda Triangle, we seem to have the reverse text structure for the first time through the analysis of three books of Reading and Writing, New Horizon College English. This time we have a pattern which starts from specific details to something general, whether they are conclusions, statements, or comments.![]()
The whole passage can be roughly divided into 3 parts:
1. The first part is made up of 3 paragraphs, from Paragraph 1 to Paragraph 3. Paragraph 1 starts with one shocking event of a mysterious disappearance of planes. Specific details have been included: the time, date of the event, 5 Navy aircraft, under perfect flying weather, only two hours’ flying, a message for help, a rescue plane searching for the missing ones which disappeared without any trace too. Then Paragraph 2 is a general introduction about the area, which tells what and where the Bermuda Triangle is: the Graveyard of the Atlantic, a mysterious area of the Atlantic Ocean. Paragraph 3 is how the public responds to the Bermuda Triangle: a lot of concern and interest but no answers produced.![]()
2. The second part consists of 5 paragraphs, from Paragraph 4 to Paragraph 8. Paragraphs 4 and 5 offer us some more recorded mysterious disappearances in the triangle. This is to confirm that the disappearance is an often-occurring event. Specific details have also been included to the point. From specific details, Paragraphs 6 to 8 are about the general responses to the mysteries. Paragraph 6 is about what the U.S. Navy thinks. It does not recognize the triangle as a danger zone and attributes the majority of disappearances to the swift Gulf Stream current, the unexplored submerged valleys of the Atlantic, the often violent weather or unusual magnetic phenomenon. Paragraph 7 contradicts with the Navy’s thoughts. Government officials argue that no reasonable explanation to date has been made for the vanishings. As a result of that, some people resort to more fantastic explanations. Paragraph 8 is about Charles Berlitz, who examines all the theories and expands upon the theory that a giant solar crystal, the power generator for the legendary lost island Atlantis, sucks passing ships and planes into the ocean.![]()
3. The third part is only one paragraph, Paragraph 9. As the Bermuda Triangle remains a mystery to us, an institute is planning to organize 300 psychics and scientists to look into the mysteries under the sea with further efforts.
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Paras. 4-8 |
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With no conclusions, an institute is planning to take 300 psychics and scientists to look into the mysteries under the sea. The Bermuda Triangle remains to be a mystery to us. Para. 9 |
